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The review for week two winning book is here!
Review for THE HALO OF VAKH by @saudade750
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🌀Cover (10/10) I love the colour choice! The typography cover is really going well with the theme of the book. The font settings are also so good!
🌀Title (5/05) It is unique and creative. The title also doesn't give away much about the story. No one would have made such a good title for the book.
🌀Blurb (9/10) The blurb doesn't reveal much and is simple and short. Maybe some quotation could have been added to make it more interesting
🌀Plot (15/15) It was a thriller plot! I couldn't guess anything about the plot. There were so many plot twists! I loved the way the writer included humans and Draedechs. The way the writer gave equal importance to all the characters, gave them all a storyline was just so good. The plot is too beautiful.
The way the writer handled Lysander's story, Sapphire's story, Ileeyan's story and the Toluer's story at once in this book is just a chef's kiss. The next sequel contains the rest of the story so I don't know the ending but to choose Lysander as the next king was a smart move.
🌀Hook (5/05) I felt so excited as I read! I didn't even realise when I completed reading the whole book! The aesthetics and every single plot details were too good.
🌀Grammar and Vocabulary (14/15) There were some spelling mistakes here and there. The vocabulary used is spectacular.
🌀Writing style (10/10) The description of the scenes is too good! I could imagine every single scene! The way the writer described the war scene, the character's emotions and bonds... It's just amazing! I have never seen anyone who has ever done such a good job with the writings ever in Wattpad! This is certainly one of the best books I have read so far and trust me, I read a lot of books.
🌀Dialogues (10/10) The dialogues were consistent and executed properly. Every single detail was precise and perfectly done.
🌀Characters & Character development (15/15) The character development is too good. The description of the characters... From the slaves to the Boner's family to Toluer... Every single characters were described so well! The bonds between the cousins, the bond between the King and Toluer are so beautifully written. Even the bonds with the horses is done perfectly. The inclusion of fantasy characters (Dryads, etc.) and the humans is well executed.
🌀Personal Opinion (5/5) The aesthetics, the plot, the writing skills, every single thing is point on! It's such an underrated book. It truly deserves so much recognition. I loved it!
🌀🌀Total (98/100)🌀🌀
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