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The review for week one winning book is here!
Review for TWO LIVES- ONE UNIVERSE by
@Again_Its_Adler
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🪽Book 1:
Two Lives-One Universe || Bakugo X reader ☘️Cover (6/10) I am not much in favour of the cover. Yes! It looks good but as I read the book, I realised that the cover seemed to not hold the vibe of the story.
☘️Title (5/05) The title seems befitting to the story. It doesn't give away the plot of the story but still! we can relate the title to the story.
☘️Blurb (9.5/10) There doesn't seem anything creative about the blurb but still it's ok. I could say it's a decent blurb which can still attract the reader's attention towards it.
☘️Plot (15/15) I loved the plot! It certainly held my attention and curiosity throughout the story.
☘️Hook (5/05) I could say that it is a suspense filled story. I couldn't predict what was going to happen in the next chapter. After every chapter, I always felt curious about the next chapter. It in itself is a big achievement for a writer.
☘️Grammar and Vocabulary (13/15) The writer has a great vocabulary and grammar. But in some places,the writer has chosen the wrong words. At some places, the tenses are getting changed. For example, the author chose to go with the past perfect for the story but he or she wrote 'this' (which is associated with present tense) which doesn't go well with the story. At some places, I noticed some irregularities with some sentences. Using punctuation marks is really important because it helps in bringing the emphasis on a dialogue or sentence. It adds more feel but there are some instances where I saw that the punctuation marks were absent or were not appropriately used. It breaks the flow and vibe of the dialogues.
☘️Writing style (10/10) The way the writer proceeds with the plot is just incredible. The writer has clearly described every single emotion and surrounding which helps in the imagination of the reader. The dialogue delivery is also marvellous. We can surely imagine the whole scenario in our mind. Vocabulary used is also fabulous
☘️Dialogues ( 10/10) I liked how the dialogues were just going with the flow. It felt as if I was witnessing a real life talk. The way the writer has included some factors which showcases the true character of the Bokugo (Like using the word 'extra' in many instances).
☘️Characters & Character development (15/15) The characters were well chosen and well described.
☘️Personal Opinion (5/5) I personally loved the book so much. I am not that big fan of anime fanfiction, but still I was enthralled and found myself curious about the story and the character. It is really a huge achievement on the side of the writer. I couldn't just leave the story in the middle.
❄️❄️Total (93.5/100)❄️❄️
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