FUENG's POV
Max, Gab and dad and I arrived with the other policemen but we left them outside while the six of us went inside with two of our troops but suddenly we hide when someone spoke"hey you're already sleeping there, wake up if you don't want the boss to be angry with you" we heard a man guarding say, the man who spoke had his back to us and was covering what he was talking to so we immediately went in good thing that our gun has a silencer so that the shot of our gun cannot be heard,
when we killed all the guards outside we went inside, it was a bit dark inside so we went straight, a little later we heard footsteps so we hid again and looked to see who was walking, it turned out to be Alex's men, we immediately shot the men of the leader of the drug lord, when we killed some of his men we left one of our troops where we hid a while ago,
a few moments later we saw something like an office chair with its back to us so we came closer but suddenly-----"just one wrong move and his head will explode" said one of Alex Lee's five remaining men, he caught one of our troops, after a while he faced us and kept laughing like a devil.......
AUTHOR's POV
"HA-HA-HA, do you think you can outsmart me huh?!" Alex laughs and shouts loudly to Fueng, Max, Marcus and Gab that now their hands are raised and their guns are taken from them by another one of Alex's remaining men"WHAT DO YOU REALLY NEED?!" Marcus shouted and asked "HAHAHAHA what do I need?!, well I don't want anything but revenge, how many years have passed since Cristine and I last met, you took her away from me you dipsh*t!","what are you saying that I took her away from you?!, until now, even after having a child, you still can't accept that Cristine chose me?!","yes, I still can't accept it, but I'm thankful anyway to you for taking care of my son Fueng!" Alex said causing for Marcus, Max, Gab and especially Fueng to be suprised
"What are you talking about huh?!","You heard it right, son, your mother was my former high school classmate who had a crush on me for a long time, because of the pain I feel because the one you consider to be my mother did not choose me now we your real mother had a one night stand and I got her pregnant I introduced her to your grandfather to stand up for my fatherhood but your grandfather doesn't like your mother so he threatened me if I don't broke up with your mother he will kill her so What I did was I hid her and when your real mother gave birth to you, she suddenly took you and ran away from the hospital, even when she was weak, she took you to the orphanage, then she left you there and immediately left but your grandfather caught her, your mother said you were dead when you were born but your grandfather killed her, daddy didn't believe you were dead so he ordered his men to look for you but they couldn't find you, so when your grandfather had a heart attack and died, I ordered my men to look for you again even though I already have my own family, but when I found you, someone had already adopted you who is none other than my rival to the first woman I loved" Alex's long story 'causing Marcus, Max and Gab to be surprised and even Fueng because of the revelation that Alex told them,
Alex stood up and held a gun pointed at Marcus but on the other hand the police outside didn't pay attention to the fact that Cristine was following them and simply walked in, she saw many dead people everywhere she passed when she got inside she saw Alex holding a gun and pointed it at her husband, Alex was about to pull the trigger of his gun that was pointed at Marcus when suddenly someone shouted "DON'T!!!!" that's why they all immediately looked where someone shouted......
CRISTINE's POV
I was restless because I felt something bad was going to happen to them so I immediately got dressed to follow them "Priya sweetie you take care of Amara first I will follow them","but aunty it's dangerous","as long as I follow them because I feel there is something bad will happen to them, take care of Amara bye","be careful" Priya said to me so I just nodded and headed to the parking lot and got into my car and droved away,
after 50mins ay nakarating na nga ako, medyo malapit lang pala ito samin kaya bumaba na ako, nag tago naman ako sandali ng makita kong madaming mga pulis na nag aabang sa labas for sure hindi nila ako papapasukin sa loob so silently sneaked in habang nakatalikod sila, ng makapasok ako ay napasin kong ang daming mga patay na tao ang nakahandusay habang naglalakad ako ay may naririnig akong nagsisigawan kaya lumapit ako sakanila ng kunti at nakita ko si Alex na babarilin na ang asawa ko
“DON'T!!!” I shouted, causing them all to look at me so I approached them"Cristine/honey/mom/aunty" they all said at the same time"plss don't shoot my husband Alex just shoot me instead, I should be the one who's at blame, Blame me because I didn't accept your love, it's just that during those times I thought of you as just a friend before I even met you, I already loved Marcus for a long time so I'm sorry" I said to Alex.........
ALEX's POV
I was about to pull the trigger when suddenly someone shouted "DON'T!!!" So we all looked to see where the scream came from, so me and even Marcus was surprised to realize that it was the girl I loved the most before who screamed "Cristine/honey/mom/aunty" we all said in shock at the same time.
"plss don't shoot my husband Alex just shoot me instead, I should be the one who's at blame, Blame me because I didn't accept your love, it's just that during those times I thought of you as just a friend before I even met you, I already loved Marcus for a long time so I'm sorry" she said "I don't care if you chose him but now he's going to die" I said and pulled the trigger and shot Marcus "NO!!!" Cristine shouted and caught the bullet that was supposed to hit Marcus......
MARCUS's POV
“NO!!!” my dearest wife shouted and caught the bullet that was supposed to hit me so I immediately approached my wife "honey why did you do that?" I cried and said to my wife and covered her wound where she was hit by a bullet, she was hit in the right side of her chest, Alex was about to speak when other policemen suddenly entered and surrounded us,
Alex's other men didn't move anymore so Fueng's other troops immediately helped us and lifted Cristine to take her to the hospital, we all got out of the warehouse and I immediately followed the police who lifted my wife, we also saved my youngest daughter and Mike,
I was about to get on the police mobile to take my wife to the hospital, when I saw that while Alex was about to get on the other police mobile, he suddenly grabbed the gun of one of the police and shot Max but Mike caught the bullet that was supposed to hit my daughter,
so the police shot Alex and killed him, the police quickly put Mike in the car and put him next to my wife and when we all got in, they started the car immediately "daddy plss fight, don't leave me, I thought you would make it up to me" Gab cried and said so Max hugged her and calmed her down..........
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