Creative Quill Contest ft. SidNaaz

Final Round Result (Short Stories Category)

Here is the final round result of Short Stories Category...

1st Position
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Teri Meri Love Storys

Writer - FatimaMalik494

Judged By - Riddhima (me)

Review
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Plot 37/40

Plots of all the stories are unique and different. Very interesting and loved the concepts very much.

Writing Style 15/20

Writing style is good but can be improved. Descriptions are little less. But overall it is fine.

Expressions 21/25

Felt the emotions and could relate with all the characters of the stories. But they could be more intense.

Overall development 13/15

All the stories are great and the concepts are very new. Loved the ending of every story. The characters in every story were portrayed so nicely. Great work.

Words of appreciation

In one word this book is fantastic. The stories, the characters, the emotions everything was on top. You are an amazing writer. Looking for more short stories from you.

Pointed to be kept in view

As I said, the writing style can be improved. Descriptions were not much which is needed to connect the readers to the story. Otherwise everything is good.

Total 86/100
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2nd Position
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Sidnaaz Short Story

Writer - AyushiGhosal

Judged By - Gurdeep ( punjabi_kudi )

Review
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Plot 34/40

The plots were good but felt the need that it could be better ... Stories were amazing on there own ... Concepts were simple yet unique which classified the beauty

Writing style 15/20

Good but can be improved more ... The scenes could be descriptes much better

Expressions 21 /25

Felt that the story could be expressed in a much better way ...you can do much better in that di

Overall development 13/15

Stories were good ... Characters were portrayed well ... The expressions lagged ... And writing style didn't matches the vibe of the story ... But overall the stories were pretty nice

Words of appreciation...

You are an amazing writer you just need to improve yourself and I trust you that you will came out as a beautiful writer ...

Much lovee and keep writing 💗

Point to be kept in view ...

Expressions should be improved ... Baaki everything was great ... Loved it 💗

Total 83/100
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For some reasons we couldn't give 3rd position to anyone but there is a special category which will be announced soon.

Congratulations to rest of you who got position ❤️❤️❤️😊😊🥳🥳🥳🎉🎉🎉