The Chronicles of Narnia- the Royals Return

Feelings.

Edmunds PoV
I watched her float away as Caspian yelled
"I got her back! I just got her back" he fell to the floor crying. Susan came to comfort him on the sandy beach. Tears stained his tanned skin, eyes burned with the tears that are yet to fall. I had lost her. I wondered what cruel thing the White witch would do to her!
"Caspian, come on"
Susan helped him from the ground. He brushed himself off and walk over to me. Her face was red from-what I thought was from crying however it was from anger.
"How could you be so careless, you let her take you and you just stood there like... like... like a lemon. You could have saved her. Gone with her. But no, you didn't! Ugh! What kind of a boyfriend are you I you can't look after your girl?"
I was dumbstruck. How dare he say those things to me. How dare he. That's not aloud, not after what he did to Susan and Emily. I could hide it. Emily wasn't here to make sure I did.
"Where were you? All the time when she need you to comfort her. She cried almost every night, wanting to see you again to make sure she didn't mess up your relationship! I was there to make sure everything was alright for her. And what about Susan?"
"Leave me out if this Edmund."
"No! You left her, she was so upset that she stopped believing in Narnia! Yes that badly. So next time you criticise what I have done for Emily and anyone else, think about what you haven't done!" I turned in the golden sand - that was now reflecting a murky blue - and I ran up to the castle. There would be time for my plan to get her back.

Caspian's PoV.
What have I done? I've been a rubbish brother and king, this what! I should have forgiven Emily as soon as I got her first letter! When she went back I started to receive these letters from her. I never gained enough courage to write back, not until about a year ago. I wasn't sure whether I should or shouldn't write back, but I'd did eventually.
"Caspian, listen I..." Susan began to talk but I stopped her with a hug.
"Never stop believing, as long as you love me, never stop!" I cupped her cheeks with my hands. once she nodded I grabbed her small pale hand and staged her up to the castle before the things come out. Nobody who has stayed outside after nightfall lives to tell the tale. Once we had Emily back we could save Narnia. She was the key to everything.

Emily's PoV.
I opened my eyes. Everything was a white-blue colour. It was magical. The walls looked like flowing water, the ceiling seemed so old that bits of dust fell from it as soon as landed, and melted. Wait, melted? Very thing came flooding back to me. I was kidnapped by my mother. no the white witch! She is no mother of mine. My mind began to stray, I wanted to be in the arms of of Edmund.
"Your awake! Hello, my name is snow! I guess I'm your sister!" She smiled, she reach my bed and leaned over me. Her skin was beautiful, though it contains little colour, it was flawless. Their eyes were the same as her mothers but they help warms, the were hot ice. He held out her hand to shake. I shook it.
"Where am I?"
"Home!" A cold cruel voice exclaimed coldly.
"Mother, she isn't strong enough!" Snow said as our- I mean her mother walk towards me.
"Nosence! She is one of us therefor , she always has strength!" She reached me and pulled me to my feet roughly.
"Ouch, hey." The room began to swim again but this time. I kept my cool (a.n like the pun?).
"Now follow me, snow better come too. See everything that you will never have!" Jadis is so bitter and horrible.
She began to show me around the castle.

Eustace PoV
I soothingly rubbed circles in my cousins back. Lucy was shaking as she cried into her pillow.
"She. Is. Gone! How could they be so stupid?" She asked me sitting up and wiping away the tears.
"I don't know." The door creaked open and gabby walked in, her hair was flowing openly down her back. A deep red dress hugged her waist, but flowed to the floor.
"I'm sorry to disrupt you two." She looked at the hand that I was rubbing Lucy back with. Blushing I quickly withdrew it. She shook her head "um... Caspian is going to start the meeting in 5 minutes and you need to be down there now really."
"Okay, Eustace go down with gabby, I know that your new here, I'll be down once I'm changed." She ushered me out of the room.
I was in a hall with gabby, all alone.
"So.." I said as we began to stroll down tho the hall, the silence was deferring.
"You and Lucy, cute couple" her voice trailed off, as though down a hill. She glanced at her feet.
"Lucy and I? A couple? No, no no! She is my cousin. Has been all my life!" I stopped and placed my hands on her shoulder steering her so she was facing me. "You have to believe me." I was desperate for her to believe and trust me, I don't know why but I yearn for her trust!
"Dude! Calm down, "she removed my hands and kissed my cheek before saying "race you!" She began to run.
"No fair! I don't know where I'm going!"
"If you hurry, then you won't get lost."
We began to run down the corridor and to the hall. Gosh, she was beautiful! The way her red velvet dress and long brown hair waved behind her. Her laugh warmed my hear. What am I saying?
I don't like her, I think I love her. This can not be good.

1017 words!!!! I hope you like it. I'm sorry if some characters people have suggested haven't come into. The story, but I can't use them all sorry. Anyway.
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