Chapter 0: The Start

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Agent, he felt bored, so he decided to go to the world of Nikke and became the Commander there. He took up the name James, just a random name he thinks of. And so, the story started.

"BA-01 down ! BA-01 down !"

"Please respond ! We've been shot down !"

He heard a female voice, definitely Marian. He plays the game long enough to know the details of this whole operation. Marian gets corrupted, got turned into a Heretics, got save by the Commander, kind of but lost all memories and finally, a pretty damned sad goodbye. But Agent doesn't care much more for all of that right now.

Back to the storyline, Marian got frustrated, "Useless piece of ... !"

"Commander! I can't get through to the Ark!"

Agent, now known as James, laughs like a maniac, to Marian's confusion, and says, "Get off me!"

"O-oh, right sorry." She says as she go to the side to let James get up.

"Ugh god..." He groans as he stands up, looking around the place, and looks at himself, he saw that he's wearing a suit, well a Commander suit. 

He then looks back at Marian with a neutral expression, and looks around this place, seems nice, somewhat for a Daybreak future.

"Who are you exactly?" He asks.

"I'm Marian, a member of the Silver Gun squad." She says while smiling.

" She says while smiling

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"So... we're going to the rendezvous point then?" He asks.

"Um right. Keep your head down, please don't worry, I will protect you, no matter what happens. Marian activating combat mode, engaging!" Marian says as she ready for combat.

And so Agent decided to sits back, grabs some popcorn, and command Marian while wearing a sunglasses. Marian confused how her Commander even got popcorns, but she doesn't bother much about that for now.

As Agent command her, he decided to do it more or less a bit lazy, but they got through eventually.

"All enemies down! Transitioning to non-combat state. Argh , my leg..." Marian says after done engaging in combat, but she got a bit hurt.

"You okay?" Agent asks.

"W-well... I'm fine, really." Marian says, "It's just my leg, don't worry about it, it doesn't affect my mobility."

"Lemme just gonna..." Agent says as he puts the popcorns away and puts a bandage onto where Marian got hurt. "Better?"

"Um... that won't be ... much use to a Nikke. But I appreciate the gesture. Thank you commander. The Rendezvous ponit should be close by." Marian says, as she felt something, something rise inside her, and it's not gonna away anytime soon.

'Oh Commander... You don't have to do that for me... I don't know how I could ever repay you... Please let me protect you forever!' Marian thought to herself, while Agent feels like he shouldn't have done that. But right now, he can worry about that later.

[I write this story cause I feels like the Commander needs to at least have common sense, and also a basic level of competence more or less better than the Ark as a whole.]

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