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Next day by 4Am Rits rooms door knocked. She is still of bed as soon as she heard the knock she gets up and makes her way towards the door. She opens the door and founds Rohit stands with his head on the edge of the wall attached with the door. As the door opened he stood properly and greet her with a big smile.
Ro=Good morning ritsy.
Rits=Good morning... Par tum itne subah mujhe gm bolne aae ho?? Seriously..
Ro takes a bag and handled her.
Rits=Yeh..
Ro=Aaj karvachauth hai.. Aur yeh saree tumhare liye meri taraf se.. Ab humari abhi shadi to hui nahi hai isiliye abhi to yeh meri taraf se tumhare liye..
Rits hugs him and said, thankyou Ro.
Ro=Tum jaldi se fresh ho jao tab tak mai sargi ke according kuch khaane ko lata hun.. Ok.
Rits nodds and goes for taking bath. After that she comes out and Ro comes back to her room with some fruits and sweets.
They have their sargi..
Rits=Ro mai ek baar phir bol rahi hun tum plzz yeh vrat bagera mat kro aur apne match pr focus kro..
Ro=Bss bss iss topic pr koi baat nahi.. Mai vrat krunga mtlb karunga... Aur vi, jadu Rah yeh log bhi to vrat kr rahe hai aur game to unka bhi hai aaj.. Thats it.
Rits=Ok baba.. Ab jao aur thoda sa rest kro.. Phir practise phir match... Very hactik day for you mr. Sharma..
Ro=Yaa.. Tum bhi aaram kro.. Byy.
Rits=Byy..
And she hugs him.. He goes out from her room. All the day mens are busy in their practice and Women's in their preparation for karvachauth.
Sak=Rits.. Aajao tum bhi mehndi lagva lo.
Rits=Jii bhabhi.. Mujhe to mehndi lagvana bahut pasand hai.
Riv=lunch kiya na tumne?? Maine dekha hi nahi tumhe table pr
Rits=wo... Woh.. Haa haa maine kr liya.. Kar liya lunch.. Apne room se kiya.
Sak=Ok.. Ab aa jao mehndi lagva lo.
Rits applies mehendi on her hands and secretly gets Rohit's name written in it.
At the time of 5-6 in evening everybody left for the stadium for the match against pak. After reaching Stadium Ro messaged Rits..
Ro~"Come to my dressing room.. Secretly.. Plzz mana mat krna.. For only 10 mins plzzz"
Rits~👍
Seeing the opportunity, Ritika goes to Rohit's dressing room... Reaching there she sees that Vi is talking to Rohit inside... Seeing him(vi)coming out she hides behind the gate... As soon as vi goes out of the room Rits goes inside by closing the door.
Rits=What's up Ro??
Ro=You are here finallyy.. And he takes her in a tight hug.
Rits feels some extra warmness of his body and when she touched him she finds him with rase temperature.
Rits=Ro you are so hot..
Ro=thanks pr itna bhi nahi..
Rits=Ohh idiot.. Mai yeh bol rahi hun ki tumhara body temperature normal nahi hai.. I think tumhe fever hai.
Ro=Aree fever wever kuch nahj hai mujhe.. Tum...
Rits=Ruko.. She goes and comes back to him by fatching a thermometer... She puts the thermometer in his mouth and checks his temperature..he just keeps looking at her with loving eyes..
Rits=Ohhh God Ro.. Tumhe to bahut High fever hai.. I think tumhe medicine leni chahiye.. Kuch hi time mai match start hone wala hai.. Mai abhi dawa lekar aati hun.
Ro=Ruk jao madam... Mujhe koi dawa wagera nahi khana.. Aaj vrat hai yaar mera.. Mai theek hun.. Don't worry.
Rits=Rohit par.. Fever
Ro=Kuch nahi hai.. Tum yeh sab chhodo aur dekho maine tumhe kuch dikhane yha bulaya hai.
Rits=Kya??
He extends his hand and shows her name written with mehndi between his middle finger and the ring finger. Seeing the name, a big smile comes on Ritika's face and she kisses his hand.
Rits=Maine bhi likhwaya hai dekho..
She extends her hand and showed him his name written on her palm in btw mehndi designs.
Ro=Kaha likha hai?? Mujhe to nahi dikh raha
Rits=Ufffuu.. Yeh dekho yaha...
He kisses on his palm and bites in her ring finger.
Rits=Ahh Rooo..
And he brokes out in laugh.
Rits place both her hands on his cheeks and cupped his face..
Rits=Ohh baby.. Ab mai jaati hun and plzz Roo dhyan se khelna.. Tumhe fever hai par ab.. Ok.. Take care.
Ro kissed on her forehead and said, ok.. Love you.
And he takes her in a hug. Then she left the dressing room followed by Ro..
India won the toss and decides to bowl First.
Team India played a good Cricket with the magic of Indian Bowlers and ends the 1st inning on 244...now its time for out baters to won the match for us..
As the 2nd inning starts.. Ro along with rish enters the field. As Ro stands at non striker end.. He feels like dizzy. He takes a deep breathe and looks for Rits who is also staring him witu her crossed fingers.
In the 3rd over Risabh gets out and Virat enters the field. India's score is 34-1....Ro and Ko shared a Great Partnership and by the 10th over India's score is 104-1....now it's a drink time..
Yuzi=Lijiye Rohitaaaa bhaiyaaa aapka drink..
Ro=Aree wohh.. Mai.. Maine liya na tu rakh ab.
Yuzi=aree par.. Par kab??
Ro=Tu pee Bee kar aaya hai kya bey.. Chl jaa ab. He takes a deep breathe.
After 2 overs Ro goes out by making 68 runs.. Further Vi and shreyas played a good Cricket and India won the match by 7 wickets.
After post match conference players returns back to their bus.
Vi=Ohhh bhai ab jaldi se bss Hotel pahunch jae taaki hum aaram se apna vrat khol sake.
Anu=Or kya... Chaand kb ka nikl aaya par vrat todne abhi tk nahi mila.
Sak=Mujhe to ab bahut jor se bhook lag aai hai.
Mahi=Tumhe kab nhi lagti..
Sak glares him badly.
Here on rits and ro seat.
Rits is holding Rohit's hand secretly.. And they are sharing an eye contact.
Rits checks his temperature and said, abhi bhi dekho kitn fever hai tumhe walki syd aur bhi jyda badh gaya hai.
Ro=Khana khaa lunga na to theek ho jaunga.. Tension nhi lo. And he rises his grip on her palm and holds it with more love.
Soon they reached their team Hotel.
Jadu=Guys 15 min mai sab terrace pr milo... Warna mai kar jaunga yaar..
Riv=Kaise baatein karte ho jadu..she yelled him badly
Jadu=Accha sorry baba ab chlo.. Sbse jyda time tumhe hi lagne wala hai tayyar hone mai.
Ro=aur ab mai chla sone..
Vi=sone?? Kyu.. Tu humare saath nahi aa raha kya??
Ro=mera kya kaam waha... Mai to single aadmi hun bhai yeh karva chauth se mera kya lena dena.
Jadu=sabse jyda sukhi insaan tu hi hai bhai.. Na koi vrat krna na kisi ke nakhre uthana..
Ro(to himself)=Tera yeh dukh mere liye sabse bad sukh hai jaddu... Mujhe to rits ke liye yeh sab krna bahut pasand hai.
Mahi=Ro baccha aur dinner?? Tu humare bina dinner krega kya??
Rits=Haa dinner to saath mai hi krte hai na hum sab.. Aisa karte hai aap sab jb tak karvachauth ka vrat kholo phir hum sab dinner ke liye milte hai..
Sak=Nhi bilkul nahi.. Tum sab hum logo ko join kr rahe ho ok... Aur Rits acche ee ready hona ok.. Kya pata next year tk tumhari bhi baat pakki ho jae.
Rits blushes and share a look with Ro.
Vi=Yaa bhabhi.. I'm also thinking about it.. Maa se baat ki hai iss bare mai aur ek ladka bhi unhone dekha hua hai.... World Cup ke baad dekhte hai.
Rits and Ro both gets shocked..
Rits=Bh..ai.... Wo.h.. Bhai.. Ab..
Anu=Abhi Rits ko apne business mai settle hone do phir baat krna yeh sab.. Abhi chlo bhi guys.
Jaddu=Haa yaar... Lagta hai tum logo ki bakwas mai chand bhi doob jayega aur surya devta prakat ho jayenge.
Vi=Ok ok fine.. Chlo.
After getting ready everybody gathers on the terrace of the Hotel..
Ath=Guys bina kisi aur discussion ke ab jaldi se sedhe pooja krlo warna mai behosh hone wali hun.
Rah=Nahi baby aisa mat bolo... Tumhe kaise kuch hoga mere hote hue.
Rits=Awwww Rah... Athu he is a perfect partner material.
Ath=Yaa I'm agree with you.
Ro whispers to rits=Aur mai?? Mai husband material nhi hun?? Hmm
Rits=Ummm... Sochna pdega.
Ro=accha..
Rits=Hmm
Vi=Lets go anu jaldi se vrat kholo aur phir khana khaa kr tumhe dawa bhi lena hai.
Anu=Ok soon to be dad jii.
Everyone starts Doing pooja of Karva Chauth. As soon as everyone gets busy in the pooja, Ro pulls Rit's hand and takes her to a corner of the terrace where no one can see him.
Rits=Ro.. Tumne sab yaha prepare karke rakha hai..
Ro=Aur kya?? Hum bhi to vrat todenge.. Ya bhooke marne ka irada hai.
Rits=Bilkul nahi.. Waise bhi tumhara fever badhta hi jaa raha hai Ro... Ab chlo jaldi se vrat kholte hai.
Ro shooks his head and rits starts Doing the pooja of moon then of Ro... She offered kumkum and raw rice first to the moon then she put tilak on Rohit's forehead.
Rits=Ro what will you do of this tilak??
Ro=I'm not want to do but i will swipe it after that.
Rits=It is necessary...
Here on virushka side.
Vi makes anu to drink water... And anu makes him to drink.. They both offerd sweets to each other.
Anu=Vi.. Let's click a selfie na..
Vi=Ok..
He takes some selfies with her then her phone rangs with a caller id Ranveer.
Vi=Itne raat ko?? Kiska call hai??
Anu=Umm woh Ranveer ka
Vi=Ranveer kapoor??
Anu=Yaaa.. Woh ek project ko lekar syd kuch baat hogi.. Tum 2 min ruko.
Anu(on call)=Yaa.. Yaa.. Ohh God buddy... Stop it ran..yaa mere pass kal aaya thaa mail.. Abhi isi bkt.. Aree par.. Ok ok.. Mai dekhti hun aur phir batati hun.. Byy... Haa baba abhi batati hun ok ok. And she cuts the call.
Vi=Kya hua??
Anu=areee kuch nahi tumhare matlb ki baat nahi hai.. Tum ruko mai abhi aati hun.
Vi=kaha jaa rahi ho.?
Anu=aree ranveer ne kal mujhe ek script send ki thi.. Ek bahut bada project hai yash raj banners ki film hai.. Aur ran ne mujhe suggest kiya woh chahta hai ki woh role mai karu.. Aur mai bhi aisa role krne ke liye sadiyon se wait kar rahi thi.. To bss mujhe woh file check krke usse batana hai ki mai yeh movie krne wali hun ua nahi.
Vi=Par.. Tum movie?? Mtlb our baby is on the way.. Then.. Matlb tum kaise??
Anu=don't worry mujhe kuch parts abhi 6 months ke pehle shoot krna hai aur phir baaki ke humare baby ke baad honge.. Jab tak humara baccha half year ka nahi ho jata... Uske baad mai manage kr lungi.. Abhi tum enjoy karo mai neeche jaati hun aur 15 min mai aati hun.
And she goes downstairs leaving vi shocked and confused.
Back to rohika:-
Then she do the aarti of moon followed by of Ro. She sees the moon through strainer(छन्नी) then she takes a look of Ro through it.. .Then she joined her hands in front of the moon after that she bents down and goes to touch rohit's fedt but he stops her and takes her near to his chest.
Ro=Rits.. She smiles and then she offered water First to moon then she turns towards Ro. He takes the glass and going to make her to drink but before she takes a sip they both heards a scream of anu...Glass slips from Rohit's hand and falls on the floor and brokes in thousand pieces.
Rits drags Ro a lil and makes him to stand away from the broken pieces.
Rits=Ro..
Ro=Anu.. Yeh anu.. Thi na.. Yeh anu ki Awaaz hai.. Usse kya hua..
Rits=Haa anu hi hai.. Chlo.. Dekhte hai..
They both runs towards the other side of the terrace and founds everybody towards the downstairs..
Vi runs to her. As they reached their they founds anu laid on the floor by her tommy.. Vi rushed to her and takes her head in his lap...
Vi=an.. Anu.. Open your eyess.. Aanu.. Kya hua.. Ro bol na dekh isse..
Blood is ozzing out from her forehead.
Ro=Ohh Godd.. Iske sir se to khoon aa raha hai.. Hume hospital chlna chaiye..
Sak=Baby.. Baby to theek hai na.. Yeh pet ke bal giri.. Kahi baby..
Vi=nahi.. Nahi.. Nahi mere bacche ko aur anu ko kauch nahi hoga.. Mai.. Mai kuch nahi hone dunga..
Vi placed his head on her belly and said, papa aapko kuch nahi hone denge.. Don't worry mai hun naaa... Then his eyes goes towards her feets..
Rits=Bha.. Bhabhi.. Sakshi bhabhi.. Woh.. Woh dekhiye.. Blood.. Blood..
Blood is coming out of her lehenga on her legs.. Everybody gets shocked.
Sak=Yeh sahi nahi hai.. Ro vi yeh sahi sign nahi hai.. Jaldi se hospital chalo.. Kahi kuch.. Kauch galat na ho jae..
Vi=Plzz bhabhi.. Aisa kuch nahi hoga mai kuch nhi hone dunga..
He takes anu in his arms and they takes her to hospital.
In the hospital she gets admitted.. And doctors are checking her.
Ro is consolling vi..
Vi=R....Ro..baby.. Anu.. Dono ko kuch nahi hoga na.. Woh dono theek honge na.. Ro kuch bol na tu..
Ro=Calm down vi.. Anu aur baby dono theek hai.. Don't worry.
Then Doctor comes out. Vi rushed to her.
Vi=Doctor she.. She is fine na.. And our baby.. Baby is also fine.. I'm right.. Plzz speak up.. Doctor.. Plzz
Doc=Mr.Kohli plzz Relax.. Your wife is fine she just has some bruises and awound on her head..... But.
Vi=What but?? My baby..
Doc=She meet with a miscarriage...Due to falling on her stomach, there was pressure on her stomach due to which the baby's womb opened and because of this, now she can never become a mother...Only after some tests we can tell whether she will have to undergo a uterus operation or not.... I'm sorry.
On hearing all this everybody gets shocked and vi feels like devastated.. He takes few steps back and sats on the benches with a thud..
Rits=Bhaii.. She runs to him and holds him by his arm...
Rits=Bhai plzz samhaliye.. Bhai.. He gets freezed and sats like a statue.. She is trying to make him to come in sense but he is out of his world..
Here on the other side Ro also gets shocked and his back dashed with wall.. He holds the neary pot for support..
Ro(in low tone)=Is she is aware with it??
Doc=No.. She gets weakend by blood lose.. So I think you guys have to give her this news.
And she leaves.
Ro and others goes inside the room one by one. Only rits and vi is outside the room.
Rits=Bhai I think hume anu ke pass jana chahiye.. She needs you.. Lets go.
She pulls him by holding his hand but he does not shift a lil.
Rits=Bhai.. Plzz anu needs you.. Aap aise toot jayenge to anu ko kaun samhalega.. Bhai plzz..
Vi(in almost broken tone)=You should go rits.. Leave me alone for a while plzz.
Rits=but bha..
Vi=I said leave.. He said in a loud and rough tone.
Rits gets scared and by holding back her tears she decides to go inside the room.
Inside the room.. Anu opens her eyes slowly slowly.. As she opened her eyes she sees Ro then others stands around her bed
Ro=Anu.. Are you ok na?? He said by caresing her hairs.
Anu smiles a lil and said, hm..
She looks here and there and try to find vi.. She also notice sadness and worrieness on everyboddy's face.
Anu=Aab sab ka chehra kyu utra hua hai aur.. Aur vii kaha hai.. Mujhe yaha aise chhod ka woh kaha gaya.. Where is he??
She tries to gets up but she feels a heavy pain in her belly and in the lower part of her body..
Anu=ahhhh... She groaned in pain by holder her hand on her lower belly...
After about 2-3 mins she opend her mouth to say something but she has No words.. Tears rolls down from her eyes..
Anu=ba.. Ba.. Bha.. Sak.. Sakshi bhabhi... Mera bacchaa... Mer.. Mera.. Baccha.. Mai.. Us.. Se.. Fee... Eel na.. hi... Kar... Pa.. Aa ra.. hi.. (In High tone)mai apne bacche no feel nahi kar paa rahi kaha... Kya hua hai plzz koi to kuch bolo.. Plzz viii.. Viii.. Viratttt.. She shouted for him... Viratttt.. And she brokes down in tears..
On hearing her in such a condition vi did not leave a sec and comes to her.. He sats besides her by holding her hands..
Vi=Anu.. Anu.. Calm... Down.. Mai aa gayaa.. Anu plzz.. And she hugs him directly. While shoabbing she said, vi mai apne baby ko feel nahi kar paa rahi.. Plzz bolo na woh safe hai naa.. Plzz..
Vi share a look with Ro.. Both are teary.. Vi takes a deep breathe and by rubbing his palm on her back he said, anu.. Anu.. Woh.. Woh.. Hu..tu.. (He said in fast flow) Tumhara miscarriage hua hai..
On hearing his words anu gets shocked... For her it seems like her world gets devastated.. She comes out of the hug and stares vi...
Vi taps on her cheeks and said, anu.. Anu..
She feels like dizzy... Her eyes is getting close.. Her head feels like revolving and her back falls on the bed..
Vi, ro, rits and others=anu.. Anuuuu..
After about 1 hrs she comes in sense and open her eyes.. As soon she open her eyes.. She holds her belly and starts crying.
Vi=Anu plzz samhalo.. Khudko.. Plzzz..
Anu=vi.yeh kya ho gaya vii... Humara baccha... Mai buri hun.. Main duniya ki sabse buri maa hun... Mai apne baby ka khyl nahi rakh pai.. Duniya mai aanr se pehle hi maine usse maar diya..
Rits=Anu.. Plz aisa mat bol.. Isme teri koi galti nahi hai plzz anu..
Anu=sab meri galti hai.. Sab meri galti hai.. Maine apne bacche ko mara.. Khud maine mara... Agar mai neeche na jati to kuch nahi hota.. Sab meri galti hai..
Sak and rivaba hugs her and helps her in being calm down.
But her words hits on vi's mind.. He thinks deeply about her words.. But he comes out of his thoughts when Ro placed his hand on his shoulder.
Ro=Vi.. Samhaal khud ko....
Vi hugss him and shobbs in his arms..
Vi=Ro plzz mujhe kuch samajh nahi aa raha... Mai.. Mai kaisr.. Mera.. Baccha..
Ro=Vi.. Jo kuch hua usmr bhagwan ki marzi thi.. Syd yeh baby tumhare liye thaa hi nahi.. Aur dekhna jald hi phir tum dono Goods News sunaoge.. Bss tu plzz apna aur anu ka khyal rakh.
Vi=Par woh.. Doc..
Ro=abhi iss sab kr baare mai mat soch..
Nur=Mr.kohli..
Vi=yEs..
Nur=your wife will be discharged tomorrow... So only you can stay here . .. Others has to go back.
Vi=Ok.. Ro tu sabko lekar waapis Hotel jaa.
Ro=Par tu akela..
Vi=mai handle kar lunga.. Tu jaa aur sab log dinner kr lena plzz..
Ro=Dinner to tune aur anu ne bhi nahi kiya... Mai kuch woh karta hun.
Vi=mai manage kar lunga.. Tu jaa..
Ro=Apna khyal rakhna ok.
Vi nodds and everybody return back to the team Hotel.... As they reached Hotel they all goes back to their respective rooms.
In Rits room:-
She is only thinking about the moments when her bhai and anu is Happy and excited to welcome the baby..
Rits=Why God why.. Bhai aur anu kitne khush thee.. Par.. Sab khtm ho gaya.. Plzz God be kind to them.
Then her eyes falls on the moon through her window.
Rits=Ro ne abhi tk apna vrat nahi khola.. Usse fever bhi tha.. Par.. I need to go to him..
She walks to his room. His room's door is locked from inside.. She knocks on the door but he is not opening the door..
She agin knock and this time he opens the door.. His eyes is red which makes it clear that he was crying.
As soon as he saw her he huggs her tightly. While hugging him she goes inside his room and locks the door. She makes him to sat on couch.
Rits=Ro.. Plzz don't cry.. Anu and bhai both are fine and I know very soon they regain the happiness..
She poured some water in a glass and offered him but he denies.
Rits=Ro plzz..
She makes him to drink water.
Ro takes the glass from her and makes her to drink water.
Rits=Now you need some rest Ro.. Aao..
She holds his hand and takes him on the bed.
She makes him to laid and place his head in her lap.
She ruffles his hairs which makes him to fall asleep followed by Rits.
Here in the hospital:-
Anu is sleeping due to narcotic nature of medicines.
But vi is still thinking about the incident.. Few flashback hits his head and tears starts rolls down.
Anu's talk with Ranveer then her words all are ecohed in his head.. He is unable to overcome this and to sleep..
But some How after thinking a lot his eyes feels tired and he falls asleep._____˚✧₊⁎❝᷀ົ≀ˍ̮ ❝᷀ົ⁎⁺˳✧______˚✧₊⁎❝᷀ົ≀ˍ̮ ❝᷀ົ⁎⁺˳✧____
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