Timmy was finally free of Vicky for a whole 3 months, as her and her family are going on a vacation. But of course, his parents still go to "work" and have to hire a new babysitter. Timmy hopes that this one isn't as bad as the last.
Danny had to ea...
Okay people.. What has it been, four years? I'm back, going into tenth grade and better than ever. I'm about to knock your socks off with the rewrite of the century! Introducing all-new learned art abilities and WAY better story building for your enjoyment. I was rereading some of these chapters recently and absolutely CRINGING at the poor writing I had made. I mean, half of the "pov's" are written from an outside perspective, as if someone else had been thinking those thoughts who knew what was going to happen.
As this has hit 30k reads (which is amazing, thank you so much and I'm sorry you had to go through this), I would like to offer a rewrite. Which, I may or may not do regardless of what people say. So, does anyone have any opinions on this? I will update you all here when the first chapter is published.
Also, here is a sneak preview at the new cover, or my first design for it anyhow
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IDK why it's sideways and idk how to fix it bare with me here
Ok, it's 2:30am (2 hours after I originally posted this). I've finished the new cover and I've read through this entire thing. I want to change a lot about it, because a lot of it felt forced. I might get rid of the car crash scene and change Skulkers appearance to Vlad instead possibly? I'm not quite sure yet, I might just go with the flow and hope it turns out alright. I want to stay true to the origins, but of course give myself creativity and room to breathe. Any suggestions would be lovely, not because I don't have ideas but because I want to know what readers want.
3am, hello again. I've found an unpublished sequel for this that I forgot about. I think I've decided what I want to do: I'm going to do a rewrite, but make the story extremely different. I mean different to the point where the basic premise is the same but the storyline is different (obviously keeping a few major elements). I want to make it longer with a better, more intricate story. What do you think?
![The New Babysitter [ALTERNATING POV'S]](https://img.wattpad.com/cover/238789732-64-k885536.jpg)