the prophecy: " Four will save the clans, a bat, a crow, a snake, and the cave. But in the end, two will die. When the night with no moon comes, corn will be cut, dirt will be plowed, cuts will bleed, and the fields and forest will burn, and the burrows will be smoked out. Unless the pack of bark and hiss is brought to stop them from fighting with tooth and claw,"
''Taking a nap Batear heard, saw, and smelt nothing, just blackness. Batear shivered because he knew he was in a dream but there was nothing, just blackness. An almost silent whisper broke the silence "When night falls, the field will fall,"
"w-whose there?" Batear asked looking around but he saw nothing. Batear squinted and in the distance was the moon shining on some stone. Batear ran as fast as he could towards the moon, feeling smooth stone coming into his paws. Realizing he was in a cave Batear ran faster toward the exit, screeches of bats echoing behind him. Running into the light of the moon, he saw huge groups of bats flying out of the cave their wings silently flapping into the night sky. The same whisper echoed from the cave her voice smooth and soft, "Bats fly in the night, crows fly in the day, and snakes will help them save the day," Turning around to see who it was a silver she-cat trotted out of the cave her silver fur shining in the moonlight. It almost seemed like she was see-through in the moonlight, and her paws looked like she was walking above the ground, not on it.
"W-who are you?" Batear asked
"I'm Meadowgaze, It's nice to meet you Batear," Meadowgaze meowed walking to Batear. Batear was about to ask how she knew his name but was distracted by the patches of the night sky on her belly. Her green eyes were as bright as the stars that speckled the night sky. suddenly the world faded into darkness and Batear knew he was going to wake up soon.'' -The Deadly Fields Chapter 2
''The shimmering stars shinned above Batear, Meadowgaze was sitting at the top of the grassy hill. beside her was a black tom with yellow eyes and a cream she-cat with amber eyes. Batear was happy to see that it was Cornstar and Ravenpool. They spoke in unison, like one voice, " Four will save the clans, a bat, a crow, a snake, and the cave. But in the end, two will die." The three paused but then continued, "When the night with no moon comes, corn will be cut, dirt will be plowed, cuts will bleed, and the fields and forest will burn, and the burrows will be smoked out. Unless the pack of bark and hiss is brought to stop them from fighting with tooth and claw,"
"W-what does that mean!?" Batear asked, "The corn has already been cut! What do you mean by... EVERYTHING!?"
"You will know when the time is right," Cornstar meowed.
"I'm sorry my friend, but we can't tell you more," Ravenpool mewed solemnly.
"Batear, you must get the pack, but be careful, they are guided by other spirits," Meadowgaze mewed before all of them faded into the stars. Batear started to sprint up the hill, he wanted to know more! '' -The Deadly Fields Chapter 6
''The night sky peaked out in the entrance of the cave, bats covered the roof of the cave, A flock of crows flew into the dark cavern and snakes followed, slithering on the stone ground. Batear walked out of the cave dogging the slithering snakes, the moon looked like a sliver, and a bright silver-pelted cat sat on the cliff. Batear remembered this she-cat, her name was Meadowgaze. Turning around Batear was mesmerized by her bright green eyes. "The snake, Bat, and Crow will go, across the path of the monsters. Before they leave they must get a grate oak, and the brightest cave to help take them," Meadowgaze echoed her words. As Meadowgaze spoke the rocks on the cave were starting to look white, and a large oak tree started to swiftly sprout out of the stones, "But beware about the stones that make up the ground, blocking the corn's way to life," -The Deadly Fields Chapter 5
''"Let all cats old enough to catch their own prey gather beneath High Rock for a clan meeting." Cornstar summoned. Batear yawned as he walked over to High Rock. Sitting down next to Crowstripe, "Star clan has given Snowfern a message, that is why I went to Sky Falls last night. Star clan has told us that three will save the clan, a bat, a crow, and a snake, But in the end, two will die." Cornstar looked over to Snowfern, who nodded for her to continue, "Star clan said 'When the night with no moon comes, corn will be cut, dirt will be plowed, cuts will bleed, and the fields will burn.' I have an idea of how this will end in our favor, but Star clans prophesies are never clear on how they will end," Cornstar took a breath and scanned the faces of her clam members, fear and curiosity on their faces, "that is all," Cornstar said leaping down and then walking into her den.'' -The Deadly Fields Chapter 3
the plot I ACTUALY have/ had planed:
(PS most of these I made in a road trip and I only read the first series at that point lol)
Plot v.0.5: Batear and Crowstripe go across the land to protect field clan. and borrow clan and forest clan are there... and while they are on their way back Crowstripe falls of bridge and dies from monster. (My thoughts on this) I find it really sad that I thought of Crowstripe DEATH before basically everything else!
Plot v.0.75: Batear, Snakefoot (Who would be Spottedpaw at that time but I cant remember if she actually had that name when I wans thinking about this...) , and Crowstripe go across the land to protect field clan. And borrow clan and forest clan are there just trying to live... and while they are on their way to who knows where, Crowstripe falls of bridge and dies from monster, traumatizing poor Spottedpaw. And while Batear tries to save Crowstripe he also falls and dies... (My thoughts and changes) So I added Spottedpaw because she was going to be the main character, but I decided otherwise. And I quickly scraped the idea of Batear dying, but also in this version Batear was going to be Spottedpaw's mentor, so Idk.
Plot v.1: Batear, Snakefoot, Crowstripe have to go across the land to get help because a new clan has came into the territory and they are causing problems. While on their tread on the vary desert like area they have to cross a huge highway and they see a smaller highway going over it on a bridge so they go on it and Crowstripe falls and dies. Devastated they go on, but while they are gone Snowfern dies! A cat with "Death growl" chased her up the barn and onto the silo (The Seed Trunk) and apart of the roof caved in and she fell to her death, dying from the fall and than her body sunk into the seeds... (My thought's and changes) Well... umm.. why do I love death so much like GOSH! and I was/am? going to kill off Snowfern like that but than I got to thinking and I was like "What if it was a prank gone wrong?" But that sounds stupid.
Plot v.1.25: Batear, Snakefoot, Crowstripe, Cavestar, and Oakpaw have to go across the land to get help because a new clan, Night clan has came into the territory and they are causing problems. While on their tread on they have to cross a huge highway and they see a smaller highway going over it on a bridge so they go on it and once on the other side they are greeted by dogs! And they find out its the clan/pack of Bark and Hiss. While they are their, they see a she-cat named Duskstar who looks EXACTLY like Crowstripe and they realize that Duskstar is Crowstripe's mother! and when they convince her that they know her son she agrees to help and sadly on their way back Crowstripe dies on the bridge... but when they get home a big battle happens and BOOM The clans are saved! (My thoughts and Changes) Up to like Chapter 3 or 5, I was going for this lol, but I decided that their wouldn't be a need to get the pack if Night clan was alone so I made Forest clan (Where Oakpaw is from) be with Night clan.
Plot v.2.5?: This is that version by the way I make the plot up while Im going so that is why I forgot about poor old Grain Lol... Please share my book if your reading this It would help me want to make more and it would help my ego a lot...
My reasons that I came up with for the stupid things I wright that don't make scenes...
1. The reason that Black Berry and Rain call Snakefoot fat is because she is just unnecessarily fluffy and during that time its just after winter like early spring, so she is even MORE FLUFFY! And I have a plan in mind but I don't want to spoil anything :}
2. Erm... Im bad a planning ahead And im kinda just making it up as I go along
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Warriors--The Treading Paws
FanfictionBatear has been having a hard time with Star clans prophecy, with Crowstripe's death, its unclear words, and Alpha wanting them to prove they can be trusted is making Batear start to doubt his abilities to succeed. Meanwhile Ravenpaw is trying to...
