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Jade

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by BookLover3062

by BookLover3062

Book by @CarmenJohnson599

Cover 5/10
The cover in my opinion is very simplistic and unimaginative, and isn't super eye catching unless you're in dark mode. It has the name of the book and the author, which I like, but I'm also not sure what the picture at the top is. Keep in mind, this is just my opinion, you don't necessarily need to change it.

Title 9/10
I think it's really simplistic like the cover, and it's also really short. I like that it's the main characters name, and I don't think you really need to change the title.

Characters 10/10
These characters are amazing. They're well thought out and complex, and I think you took the time to get to know Jade that some authors don't take.

Plot/storyline 10/10
The plot was definitely unique, and there weren't any gaps or holes. I liked that there were gaps for the main character, but the readers knew what was happening but at the same time didn't.

Enjoyment 10/10
I loved this story! I've only read ten chapters since I have a lot of books to review, but I'm gonna try to read more in the future when I'm less busy or have time. I enjoyed the overall presentation of the story and I liked the description and world building that introduced us to the world while still progressing the story.

Description 9/10
It's not too short that it doesn't give enough information, but it's not so long that people get bored. It's in the sweet spot for length and provides the information needed. The only thing I might recommend is possibly adding a small excerpt or something from the story in the beginning like a hook to draw readers in from the little they might see while scrolling through rankings and searches and stuff.

Overall 53/60
All in all this is a pretty good book! I would definitely recommend it to you guys! I would recommend maybe getting a new cover and possibly lightly edited it, but other than that I loved it!