A girl from an inhumane experiment on developing halo breaking weapons, was saved by a group of girls wearing maid outfits along with their Sensei. Now attaining her freedom and could life her life as a normal student. Follow through her story as sh...
Hello everyone! Thank you for reading the 1st Volume of my fanfic. I made this a separate chapter to make things organized and for ✨Chapter Count✨.
Well, for those who read the version prior to the rewrite what do you think? I cooked really well don't I hahaha.
For starters, let's talk on why I did the rewrite.
Though at first, I did not want to do this because; 1. I don't want to make the same mistake like I did in my last story where I abandoned it because I was burnt out. 2. It's a pain to rewrite 30k words worth of content. 3. I was writing the final chapter of Volume 2 and didn't want to go back.
So given with all these reasons, I still rewrote it.
Why?
For Volume 3 of course!
Well... To explain it... Let's just say the plans I made for Volume 3 is so rough that I don't have much foundation to have all of it make sense.
So, I had to rewrite Volume 1 for these foundations... And boi I'm surprised that I managed to finish this without scraping this whole story off. From 30k words initially, I now finished with a 50k word monstrosity of a Volume. Then again Volume 2 would still have more, now that my OCD is itching to polish it.
Anyways... Speaking of foundation.
I added many things into the Volume 1 Rewrite. From the 100k words worth of ideas I scrapped and saved into a Recycling Bin Chapter, I put many of the things I originally removed back into the Volume 1 because I now know where to put them. I also moved some scenes from various chapters around so that the whole story still makes sense.
With that all that talk about the creation of this volume done, I'm going to put a survey here like in the original. I'll also leave the results of previous survey here for the old readers.
Here's the survey:
1. From 0 to 10, How was my story? For the ones who read the original and the updated version, how many points will you add to your second impressions?
2. If there is for room for improvement, what should I improve? This will be used for future chapters. Maybe some minor updates to Volume 2.
3. From making art of Kodou (using only my art skills, no AI) or me attempting to do one voice line of her (Please don't choose this as it might be cringe inducing...), which do you prefer?
- For this... Most people chose both, so I'll give you both XD.
Art: [I drew one which was meant to be for Volume 3: Prologue but since I 'accidentally' drew another couple more and made an animation. Here's what I can show you that avoids 'spoilers'. I'm sure you already seen all of these after reading Volume 1.]
With AI (Only for Background, rest is just me)
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With AI (Character is AI but made some fixes)
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Pure Art Skills:
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Voice Acting (Prepare for cringe XD):
(For both Art and Voice line combined... I'm still cooking on my own little talking Arona walking and talking on my desktop).
4. Do you like long chapters (5k words minimum) or short chapters (less than 5k words)?
- Many had chosen long chapters, so I made a standard that Main Chapters should be at least 7k word long.
5. Finally, Do you want a cookie🍪?
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