A BEAUTIFUL DISASTER

chapter 5

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Vel got details of the members spoke against tin .he made his man give them warning and they are asked to say sorry in front of every one tomorrow. This night vel is planning to visit Tin again. He is missing him already . He has the feeling of missing his mate . Vel is waiting outside the hotel. Tin went near the car .Tin is smiling all the way. Vel checked the surrounding .tin sat in the front seat .
Vel : go back baby
Tin : why ?
Vel : treat me as your driver or some cab person
Tin : vel, don't be so stupid, i have my car .i will go in my car
Vel : i don't want them to speculate already.
Tin : no , don't play with me vel .
Vel : tin , i don't want your father to find out about us because he is too dangerous as you said .
Tin : he will not do anything , i understand your fear. I will sit back .i am messaging my staff at home to leave early.what about my car
Vel : leave it here .We can get it afterwards.
Tin : okay
Vel : do you want to eat anything ?
Tin : we have dinner at home .
Vel :we need so much energy for the night .
Tin smiled at him.tin is not a shy person but tin's ear became so red that they are visible.
Vel drove fast towards tin's home .they thought of eating dinner and having sex but vel is so hungry for tin .
Vel : tin , let me lead today.
Tin : okay
Vel tore tin's dress and they are eating each other like it is the last day on the earth.vel is pinching  and slapping tin's ass. Tin's nipples are looking huge today because vel is being merciless with them .they are red and vel is biting tin's neck. Tin's cock is well taken care of by vel's hand.
Vel : if i continue like this . You will be needing a bra babe .
Tin : leave my chest alone vel.
Vel : it is getting large babe.
Tin : blow me, vel
Vel : ah......do you need me tin .beg me .kneel down
Tin is kneeling in front of vel. He looked so sad . Vel can sense disappointment in tin .within seconds he made him stand up and he kneeled and  gave tin  a best orgasm. Tin cummed inside vel's mouth.
Tin : let me eat and gain energy and come back.
Vel forcefully pushed tin back and removed his pants fully
Vel : do you think . You can stop me
Tin: how can i compete with a fat guy
Vel : you should be punished babe .
Tin's legs were spread and vel tried to  enter him in missionary style .Tin stopped him.
Vel : why?
Tin : condom
Vel took it from his pocket and kept it on. Vel entered him .vel is giving thrusts very slowly and tin is enjoying slowly
Everything. Vel is increasing his speed . His moments are faster as he is reaching his climax. It is already half an hour .vel and tin climaxed once again at the same time.
Tin spread his hands for vel to get in .vel obeyed tin and got beside him .both are energy less.
Tin :i am older than you by 1 month .
Vel : oh my god p'tin . Do you want me call you so
Tin : keep quiet nong .
Vel : phi , get me something to eat . I have no energy left
Tin : do you think i have energy after your action.
While they are speaking they hear someone shouting for tin . Tin went down wearing clothes. Vel also accompanied him .thinking it may be some danger .
Financer from meeting of tin ( partner): tin , we are extremely sorrow for behaviour
Tin : why are you saying at the middle of night .did my dad got involved
Partner : no sir
Tin didn't believe his words .he thinks his father is toxic and doesn't like anyone to speak against them
Tin: just leave , don't get afraid. I will not allow anything to happen .
Partner left .
Tin : vel ,come here don't get scared of me  . If i can protect my  business partner. I don't allow anything  happen to you.
Vel : i know 
vel don't know what to do .
Vel : baby get me something to eat .
Tin : i will reheat and bring food.
Vel kept his head on the couch and he tried to relax . Vel is waiting for tin and tin brought food .
Vel is serving tin . Tin is eating so fast .
Vel : slow ,it is not good
Tin : i am so hungry
Vel : okay , do you want me to feed you ?
Tin: no need ,just eat
Vel loves to see tin to eat .Vel got a message from  sai .vel informed tin and left . Tin went to bed .
Vel arrived at sai's home .
Sai : vel ,officer gary is the one who found out about the red market .someone inside helped him . We have to find him
Vel : what happened?
Sai : he is approaching us . We will be in prison . if we don't find him. There is a person inside leaking our data .
Vel : okay i will find him.
Sai : good , by the way why are you hiding from tony
Vel : me and tin are growing closer .if he  tells tin that i am a mafia person.tin will not look at me
Sai : be careful vel, tell him as early as possible.
Vel :okay phi
Sai : there is an event organised by our company chain  .we need organisers and food .can you contact tin and inform me about it
Vel : sure phi
Sai : so , finally you got what you want .
Vel : yes phi , he is so kind . He eats like a kid
Sai : i am so happy for you vel . don't hurt him .
Vel : i will never hurt him phi. Even it is a dream .