Utopian Fanfiction Awards 2024 [CLOSED]

🔱 Percy Jackson: R1 🔱

Please do not feel discouraged if you did not place this round, your story will find its time!

There will be more contests next year to showcase your talent! Keep up the great work!

❥ Your delightful judges: mermaidunicorn10, SilveryEcho & Fata_Viola

❥ The entries that have passed into Round Two but in no particular order:

🔱 Angels and Death by Moon_Lit_Ocean

🔱  The Sun Without Stars by Sybilz (Mature)

🔱  How The Mist Fell by Tab1kat (Mature)

🔱 Tidalwave by _-R0gu3-J3d1-_

🔱 I Can't Count The Reasons by TheRedSourPatchKid

🔱 I'll See You Again When I Escape by Stardust_in_the_Sea

🔱 The Life of a Demigod (Leo) by kominomi

🔱 Walk With the Shadows by Silmarilz1701

Thank you to the below users for participating! We look forward to seeing your entries in the future!

🔱  The Dam Adventure by ImDoubleAgent1

Title: 7/10

Book Cover: 6/10

Summary: 4/10

Story Description: 5/10

Reader Engagement: 3/10

Plot Uniqueness: 7/10

Character Development: 5/10

Creativity: 8/10

Writing Style: 4/10

Grammar/Punctuation: 1/10

Total: 50/100

Comments by SilveryEcho: The grammar and punctuation was killing me and I could barely read the six chapters I did. It would have been better to have a more engaging start and more description. I liked the idea of the story and it is headed in an interesting direction.

🔱  Mortals meet Solangelo by Ranger_with_the_gays

Title: 6/10

Book Cover: 6/10

Summary: 3/10

Story Description: 5/10

Reader Engagement: 6/10

Plot Uniqueness: 5/10

Character Development: 5/10

Creativity: 6/10

Writing Style: 6/10

Grammar/Punctuation: 6/10

Total: 54/100

Comments by Fata_Viola: High school setting. Demigods (mostly Will and Nico) living their life when they are not off fighting monsters.

Not very original concept and not very creatively worked out. The characters were rather flat, even Will and Nico, who from the main series already have quite a unique personality.

Also, it wasn't really a novel, but rather different excerpts that constantly change pov and don't really follow up on each other.

That was a nice idea, but it made it hard to judge it as a novel (especially regarding plot and character development).

The writing style was okay, although still blunt and there were a lot of spelling and grammar mistakes. The writer does know the fandom, because they used the correct nicknames and ways of interaction. Overall, not great, but an okay book.

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Please stay tuned for the next set of results to be published shortly!

❥ Winners Deadline: September 3rd.

- El at The Happy Writers Community  🔱