Beautiful night... Moon shining with all its stars, and on Earth, on the end point of the land, on a cliff, there stands a beautiful lady at the edge... Blue lotus eyes, Brownish black wavy long hair with a hue of blue to them, Golden skin adorned with grace itself. She looks down the cliff, a shiny blueish thing whirling above the water, as if .... an opening to another timeline, another world, another life. With no control on her body, no sense of what to do, involuntarily, she thinks of that whorl as attractive, something in it calling for her.
"So beautiful... should I jump in?" The words of her inner consciousness, unknown to herself as she takes a step forward and tilts forward slightly, before feeling a hand holding her from falling off the cliff in that whorl that's calling for her.
"What do you think you're doing?!" That voice frantic and panicked, the man holds her hand tightly as she looks back to that whorl.
"I...", she begins... but is not able to speak forward as she again looks back to that whorl as if she's enchanted, a beautiful melody coming from that whorl calling for her...
"What is this thing? why do I feel this...?", her mind thinks...
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