Chapter 21

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Hey guys, I noticed the story's getting 200+ views and 30 votes, but barely any comments. Is there something about the storyline that's not working? Should I change or improve anything? Your feedback means a lot, and it's a bit demotivating without it. Would love to hear your thoughts!
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Sara and Shubman decided to spend the day exploring Bali's vibrant markets. As they walked hand in hand through the colorful streets, Sara couldn't help but feel excited about the day ahead. The mix of local crafts, unique clothing, and handmade jewelry had always fascinated her, and she was eager to find something special.

Shubman, on the other hand, was more focused on watching Sara's eyes light up with every new stall they passed. He loved how easily she found joy in the little things, and today, he was determined to make it all about her.

At one stall, Sara picked up a delicate silver bracelet and held it up for Shubman to see. "What do you think? Would this suit me?"

Shubman smiled, his eyes softening. "Everything suits you," he said, causing Sara to blush.

They continued wandering through the market, laughing and chatting. Shubman found himself enjoying the day more than he expected, just seeing Sara happy. He even teased her as she spent way too long deciding between two scarves.

As they finished shopping, loaded with bags, Shubman suggested grabbing some food. They found a cozy little café by the beach and sat down, enjoying the peaceful sound of the waves crashing nearby.

Sara reached out and intertwined her fingers with Shubman's, giving his hand a gentle squeeze. "Today was perfect," she whispered, her eyes twinkling.

Shubman smiled, leaning in to kiss her forehead. "It's always perfect with you."

After their blissful Bali trip, Sara and Shubman returned to Mumbai. The moment they stepped back onto campus for the start of the second term, things shifted. Shubman, fresh off his high-profile match, was now the center of attention. The second they entered the college grounds, girls began swarming around him, complimenting his performance, asking for pictures, and giggling over his presence.

"Shubman! That match was amazing!"

"Can we get a selfie, please?"

"You were so good out there!"

Sara stood off to the side, watching it all unfold. Her heart sank as she saw girls hovering around him, each one trying to grab a piece of his attention. Shubman, being his usual polite self, entertained them with smiles and short conversations. But the longer this went on, the more jealous Sara felt. She had just spent a beautiful few days with him in Bali, and now it seemed like he was slipping away into the hands of every other girl in the college.

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