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Unfair Candy-Kid Ratio (Written in 7th grade)

The ferocious winds were up, in the city of Bloxburg, and there wasn't a peep coming from the houses. But in one monsturous mansion lived a very wealthy family called the Davidsons. It was halloween, and everyone was very excited. Laura, the mom exclaimed, "let's go trick-or-treating!!!" Lauren was all ready. She had on her beautiful Halloween costume. She was a cat that year. They went out. The stars danced like crazy. Lauren was in motion like crazy. She had posted a picture of her in her Halloween costume. They were at the first house. They yelled "Trick Or Treat!!!" They gave Lauren and Alana some candy. The next house had a bowl that had words written on them. They read "Take 2." Alana dumped the whole bowl into her basket. That was not fair! Lauren wanted some candy. Laura dragged Alana back home. Lauren came too with such a scarce amount of candy. "Maybe next year," thought Lauren. Alana was taking a bath as Laura was spanking her. Alana went straight to bed as they did their family party without her.