Harmoniya: The Architects way

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For all that reached this far I'm, firstly, sorry if it wasn't great or really difficult to read and, secondly, I still hope that you liked it in someway. As I said it's my first little story and I'm quite insecure about it. I like it but I don't know how it turned out for others.
If any has some suggestions for improvement please let me hear them, just please stay nice.
As far as it stands right now, this specific short story is finished by its own. The characters definitely will appear in other stories I'm working on but I can't say how long it will take me to finish them.
Many thanks to a particular friend of mine who encouraged me to keep writing. I'm sure you'll know that I'm talking about you. I'm really grateful. ^^

Everyone, have a good day.