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~Cover 8/10
I liked how the cover is simple yet it looked beautiful on the book. I also like how the red jacket that Taehyung is wearing, a similar type of clothing could be seen throughout the story.
The author can also check out some graphic shops on Wattpad if they want their cover to be more attractive. ^-^
~Title 2/10
Unfortunately, I didn't see any relation between the plot and the title. The cover, title and description of the book should reflect on what your book is going to be from inside. These three things should relate to your plot for clearance and relation.
And from what I've read, I don't think the title has any relation with the story and the plot. Here I'll provide the author with some suggestions.
Example
'The Forgotten Soul' 'When Memories Return' 'From Ashes To Forever' 'The Girl He Forgot'
I have written every single title I thought related to the author's story.
~Description 4/10
The description doesn't give us much of an idea of what the story is going to be about. Also, there are grammatical and punctuation errors in it. Not to mention that the description is also quite long.
Readers like a description which is short, crisp and intriguing with a hint of what the whole book is going to be about; make sure not to write the whole summary.
If the author wants to change it, I suggest giving hints about the plot to create an intriguing effect for the readers.
For example:
When fate brings Taehyung and Y/n together in a cosy cafe, their love blossoms. But darkness from Y/n's past and Taehyung's mother's disapproval threaten to tear them apart. An accident erases Taehyung's memories, leaving Y/n heartbroken. Years later, their paths cross again in one of the least expected of places - Y/n's own company. As Taehyung's memories resurface, will their love blossom, or will the past destroy their future?
