I apologize for the oversight. Let’s clarify the characters correctly and focus on the main groups without including anyone from the Loser Motel. Here’s a revised scene:
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Camp Cedar Ridge: The Unlikely Summer
Team Teal's Financial Struggles
As Team Teal gathered at the campsite for breakfast, Wyatt couldn't help but feel the weight of his family’s indifference. His teammates, Nathan and Grace, were chatting excitedly about what they planned to buy with the money they had, while Wyatt just stared at his empty wallet.
"Hey, Wyatt! What did you get from your parents?" Nathan asked, trying to spark a conversation.
Wyatt shrugged, forcing a smile. “Oh, just some...cents.” He couldn’t bring himself to say he had nothing at all. It hurt too much to admit how little his family cared. They hadn’t even sent him enough for a decent snack.
“Cents? That’s all?” Nathan looked surprised. “I thought your family would support you more.”
“It’s fine,” Wyatt replied, his voice lacking enthusiasm. “I guess they just don’t care.”
Grace's Grumpy Perspective
Grace, the 67-year-old grandma of the group, huffed as she overheard their conversation. “You boys need to toughen up! Back in my day, we didn’t have parents showering us with money. We made do with what we had!”
Wyatt smiled weakly. “Yeah, I get that, Grace.”
“Well, if you’re not buying anything, at least help me gather some firewood later,” she added, shaking her head as if to say ‘kids these days.’
Team Pink's Shopping Plans
Meanwhile, Team Pink was busy discussing their shopping plans. Sarah, Jace, Brad, and Zoe were all excited about what they could get.
“I can’t wait to get some snacks and maybe a cute outfit!” Sarah exclaimed, her eyes sparkling with anticipation.
“Don’t forget bathroom stuff!” Jace reminded, glancing at Zoe, who was grinning mischievously. “And maybe we can find something fun for our team!”
Zoe nodded, her expression innocent, but she was plotting something a little devious. “What if we also buy some toys? That would be fun!”
Team Orange's Strategy
Across the way, Team Orange was strategizing for their shopping spree. Levi, Dylan, and Felix were busy discussing what they should buy.
“We should get snacks and supplies for the next challenges,” Levi suggested. “We need to stay ahead!”
“Totally agree! Plus, we should grab some fun stuff too!” Dylan added enthusiastically. “I heard there are games at the store!”
Felix was busy jotting down a list. “Let’s make sure we don’t miss anything! This is our chance to stock up!”
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Please let me know if you need any more changes or if there’s anything else you would like to add!
Got it! Let’s revise that scene to reflect that Wyatt is from the UK and that he has a different legal drinking age. Here’s the updated scene:
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Camp Cedar Ridge: The Unlikely Summer
A Chance Encounter
After a long day of challenges and shopping, Team Teal’s Wyatt found himself wandering toward the host tent. He felt out of place, especially since he hadn’t bought anything with the cents his parents had sent. As he approached the tent, he noticed the flap was slightly open and heard voices inside.
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Pertualangan: --- At Camp Cedar Ridge, twelve campers from wildly different backgrounds are about to experience a summer like no other. There's Wyatt, a 15-year-old boy with a childlike heart, who's excited for adventure despite not fully understanding why he's...
