Money Trees

27 ✮ What Really Matters

Mai's eyes flicked to the clock for the third time in as many minutes. Madeline had texted Mai and told her she was finished reading her review. She said she would call her which was why Mai had been restless all morning, her stomach a tight knot of anticipation. The review she had sent to Maddie a few days ago had felt like her best work in months, but now, as she waited for feedback, doubts crept in.

Blake Rodriguez's winter collection was undeniably beautiful. Mai had praised the thematically appropriate patterns and textures, the mix of traditional fabrics with sleek cuts. It was polished and complimentary, a solid piece of writing that showcased her knowledge of trends. But no matter how much she reread it, she couldn't quite pinpoint what was wrong with it. It lacked a certain je ne sais quoi and Mai knew Maddie would pick up on that.

Her phone buzzed on the table, and she jumped, snatching it up immediately.

"Hey, Maddie," she said, trying to keep her voice steady.

"Hey, babe," Maddie's voice came through, warm. "Are you free to talk now? I've read through your review. Got a few things to talk about."

Mai swallowed hard. "Shoot."

Maddie didn't mince her words. "It's good. You've got the basics down, and the way you describe the collection shows you understand fashion. I'm really impressed by your knowledge and I think your past in fashion design really stands out in your writing."

"But...."

Madeline chuckled. "Listen, it would be a waste of both of our times if I didn't give you constructive criticism. You understand that right?"

"Of course. And I'm so grateful for this. I want to improve so lay it on me."

"Mai, it's just... it's bland. It was more educational than anything, like reading a textbook. You're not saying anything new. You're playing it too safe."

"Too safe?"

"Yes," Maddie continued. "Your writing is pretty, but it's not critical or personal. When I read your work, I want your personality to shine through. You're not pushing the boundaries, not offering a fresh take but I know it's something you can do. If you want to stand out in this industry, you need to be more daring. Don't just praise the collection. Analyse it, question it. What worked, what didn't?"

Mai leaned back and took in Madeline's words. She had poured her energy into making the review polished and professional, but had she held back too much? Maddie was right- she needed to be bolder.

"Okay. You're right. I'm going to do it again."

"Excellent! I look forward to reading your work!"

  After hanging up, Mai puffed out a large breath of air, thinking about what her next move would be. Maybe she needed inspiration. Or a distraction. Because, if she was being honest, her mind was still fixated on Apollo. In fact, she had been so focused on her relationship with him that she basically ignored everyone else close to her. That had to be her next step. To get back in touch with her friends.

  She didn't think Ivy would answer. But thankfully she did.

  "What do you want?" Ivy answered coldly.

Mai flinched at Ivy's tone. "Hey..."

"What do you want?" Ivy repeated.

   She had been expecting a chilly reception, but Ivy's resentment hit harder than she had prepared for.

"I know I haven't been a great friend lately," she began. "I wanted to check in and see how you're doing."

The pause was long enough that Mai wondered if Ivy had hung up. Finally, Ivy spoke, her voice laced with irritation.