Dear Rime,
It's nice to hear that your work is being published. I'd say you're talented, but I guess you know that already. Is Faithless being published, or Cases of You? Personally, I like Faithless more. It's more human, I think a critic said once. I could never put it into those words myself, but I try to. I agree with him. Cases of You is, I think the word is repetitive, but I'm not sure. Johmak was a more likable character on a personal level to me, and Torin doesn't match up to him. Torin seems smarter, though.
I took your advice on the haiku. My skills are developing quickly. I would have named this one Learning, if I could.
I see white writing
Scribbled on a board, I wish
I knew what it meant
Love, Dorian.
YOU ARE READING
Letters To Rime
PoetryMy tests writing in an epistolary fashion, as well as writing from two different first-person perspectives. Dorian, a well-intentioned but obtuse individual, writes loosely-connected poetry to a much quicker author, Rime. They discuss plans to meet...
