Saga Of The Timeless (A Mahabharata Story)

70. Authors Note

Hey everyone,

I know, another author's note—but this time, it's a heartfelt request for genuine feedback.

Over the past few days, I've received quite a few messages that have really opened my eyes and made me reflect on the story. This is not a chapter pointing fingers; rather, it's me reaching out because I'm concerned and genuinely interested in how you're experiencing the story. Your thoughts mean the world to me, and it's essential to me that we're all on the same page. I never wanted anyone to feel disconnected from the characters or frustrated by the plot. So, I'm here, truly listening, to understand your thoughts and gather honest feedback.

I've noticed some of you find Tvarita's character hard to relate to or perhaps a bit complex. I understand her journey, from Karna to Arjun, might come across as sudden or confusing at times. But her choices, while layered, are meant to reflect her growth and struggles with love, life, and destiny. Yet, I keep hearing that certain plot points—especially the marriages of Karna and Arjun, along with Tvarita's change of heart—might make the story feel overly complicated. That was never my intention. I want each twist and turn to be something you look forward to, not something that leaves you feeling lost or frustrated.

So here's what I'm honestly asking: Does the story feel too complex? Do you feel that Tvarita's character, or the way her relationships progress, needs more depth or clarity? Or has the tone of the story become a bit too serious for your taste? Are there specific parts that could benefit from a clearer direction, or do you feel the story has lost a bit of its original spark?

This is not about defending my choices or dismissing concerns; it's about crafting a reading experience that resonates with you. If there are parts that seem confusing or distracting, please let me know. I'm seriously considering making revisions to add clarity, and I would love your honest input to guide me. All I'm asking is: Should I simplify the plot and keep things lighter and more engaging? Or should I just fine-tune certain moments to align with the tone of the story as it's unfolding?

Thank you so much for your patience, understanding, and for staying with me through each chapter. You're the heart and soul of this story, and I couldn't be more grateful for your support and honesty. Please don't hesitate to share your thoughts with me—I'm here to listen and improve.

Warm regards,
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