The girl with the galaxie in her eyes

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4 o clock " come in just a little bit " I just wanted school over its going to be vacation and I just can't wait , 4:10 " yes !!! " School is over ! . I rushed as fast as I could. Letting the bell rang behind , when I finally got out I heard a voice calling me " Rafael ! " I turned
My head to figure out who was , oh great its Melanie , I don't like her , she's annoying and mean to other girls, even if she's pretty , she has golden curls and a pair of beautiful green eyes but wayyyy too skinny, can speak to you for a sec ? " Men what it is now . last time I spoke to her I ended in up detention " yeah , what is it ... I'm kinda of running late to get to the park " I didn't want to sound mean but I don't want to talk with her , Really no ,not now ,

" Oh ..I ..a ... just .. w-wanted to invite you to my place ...? "

I'm i hearing this or it's just my mind , Melanie Johanne Parker , the most pretty girl , captain of the cheerleaders and best kisser ( I only heard . I never tried it . because I never had kissed someone , yeah I still looking for the right girl to give away my first kiss ) inviting me to her house and also nervous ? This got to be a joke, well not that much , I got to say I'm kinda of handsome , Blue eyes , really tall , my hair is caramel and I got a little sporty workout body ( I got an older brother who's in the pentagon , and he's just crazy about exercise , so he takes me with him every time he can  )

"Emm ... thanks Melanie but ... I have to get to the park .... " Please don't say anything else and let me finish , " Sorry ....? " I don't know if that sounded more like a question than an answer " i just gotta go .... " I said as I walk trough people " sorry ! " I yelled and went strait to the skate park with monalisa ( my skate )

AUTORS NOTE : pic of monalisa on the multimedia )

and brought some mountain dew and skittles .
When i was finally there I saw my the park
epmty "awesome!!" I said and started skating for about two hours and decided to go home

I started to ride home , giving slow turns ands shifts has I was making my way trough town. Left turn behind the disco store , straight across the flower shop , another turn , almost home . Right when i was going tu go behind a store i fell to the ground , i tried to get on my feet but felt someone tackling me to the ground , putting a hand on my mouth " what th-" , " shhhhh , say a word and i kill you " I just nodded , agreeing to those terms .

Whoever was on top backed away , i turned around to see my attacker ,   what ? Its a girl ...around my age , i think .... Shes wearing completely black from boots to hoodie , the only colored thing you could see were her eyes , wait .., multicolored actually , it was like staring at the night sky , they were big and looked like a galaxy trapped in two little orbs , there beautiful  .

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⏰ Last updated: Nov 02, 2016 ⏰

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