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It was too disheartening to see so low response on the previous update. Is the storyline so boring? I guess so. Maybe that's why there wasn't much feedback. It really left me wondering whether to continue the story or not. I guess I should give this boring storyline a quick ending as uh guys aren't interested anymore.
Anyways, here's another one,
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Elsewhere,
Abhira was frantically searching the entire Poddar Mansion. She was getting breathless with each passing second. Lines of worry and regret filled her temple. Her mind was clouding with a lot of thoughts led by the happenings of the entire day. Yet keeping everything that tried to catch her attention aside, she tried to focus on the most important task in hand. As she continued her search for her angry husband, she suddenly stopped in her tracks upon hearing a loud thud that echoed in the entire mansion.
Her heart crashed. Fearing the worst, she literally dived into the direction of the source of the sound. As soon as she reached there, familiar dark locks came into view through which she loves to run her hands and mess them earning herself an irritated but playful scowl. The face she had loved with all her might looked so devasted that her entire body shooked. The person whom she had loved with her everything lay like a corpse in front of her. Her heart ached. And with a wave of crashing emotions, she shrieked painfully," ARMAAN! "
Here, the blissful moment of the mother-son duo was interrupted by the loud thud followed by the painful cry of their daughter-in-law, that seems to have visibly shaken up the entire mansion. It held so much pain that it can even dig holes in a giant stone. Hearing the name of their beloved with so much pain, both rushed to their feet, ultimately fighting all the negative thoughts that clouded their thinking.
Rohit, who was giving his wife her medicines, rushed to the source of voice. Even Ruhi followed, letting the glass of water crashing on the floor. But careful enough not to harm herself.
Abhira rushed to Arman's side. Taking his head in her lap, she murmured," Wake up you silly boy! I know you are angry with me, but please don't punish me like this. You are freaking me, Wake up khadoosmann! It's more than enough." She frantically tapped his cheeks, urging him to wake up and hoping to get him responsive. Well she got nothing in return. No response, nothing. Just the deadly silence greeted her.
As soon as Madhav reached the spot, the sight in front of him made his heart crumbled into pieces. His son lay there, so weak and fragile in his daughter's lap, made him tear up. But his concise worked fast. He knew what to be done. Being a dutiful father, he went on to pick up his child and immediately asked Krish to call the doctor.
As Madhav and Abhira picked Arman up from the ground and held him from either side, Rohit held Arman form the other side urging Abhira to step aside and get some water for his brother. Abhira wanted to protest, but stepped aside quietly and quickly knowing the gravity of the situation. She forwarded her dupatta to Rohit's hand that she had kept at the cut on Arman's forehead, urging him to keep it at the wound to stop bleeding. Rohit followed the instruction quickly.
Madhav looked at Rohit, as his eyes locked with Rohit's, an understanding nod passed between them. Kaveri ordered them to take Arman to his room (Rohit's and Ruhi's old room as Arman's and Abhira's room was passed to them stating their family is getting bigger!)
{Author's pov: - huh! Like seriously? The child is still in Ruhi's womb. But the family is getting bigger? Dude even Ruhi's baby bump is not visible yet but the family is getting bigger! What rubbish! Well I found it really illogical reason to cast Arman and Abhira out of their room.}
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Muntazir mai tera✨ {On Hold}
FanfictionWhat if the things went to an extreme end. And the love will be tested. Will they be each other's Muntazir?