Muntazir mai tera✨ {On Hold}

6.

Doodles!

So here we are with another one. But before that,

I wanted to ask you all :-
1) Should I add precap at the end about the upcoming one.?
2) Should I write dialogues in Hinglish Or English Or both would be better?

Also, Do share your opinion on the story line and my way of writing. Looking forward for your suggestions. I 'll try my best to make it better.

Thank you for your support❣️✨

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(Continuing for the last chapter,)

Sensing the tension building around her, the doctor addressed them, “Well, Arman is out of danger. He had fainted due to exhaustion. Maybe he had a panic or anxiety attack too. We can’t conclude anything just like this. I had given him injection and he will regain consciousness in a while. Bring him to hospital after a few days of rest so that we can conduct tests before reaching on any conclusion. Although there is no need to worry, I would request you to keep him away from any stress or any mental breakdown. His mind is not in condition to undergo any kind of stress. Try to create a happy environment around him and organize things he like or what provides him peace. Also I had prescribed some medications and handed it to Abhira. Make sure he takes his medicines on time. Now, I may take my leave. And in any emergency, do tell me. I’ll help.”

Everyone sighed in relief. Kaveri and Madhav expressed their gratitude to the doctor. Doctor smiled humbly. Manoj offered to drop her home. As they left, Rohit turned to Abhira. “Bhabhi, give me the prescriptions. I’ll get them right away.”

But Abhira stood there motionlessly lost in deep thoughts. She wondered," Panic or anxiety attacks are my specialty. How come Arman got into it? What happened that led him to this state? He was angry and she knows it. But anger never led him to attacks. What it could be then? Does anyone say something to him?” All the thoughts clouded her mind detaching her from the world around her.

Rohit looked at her lost and lifeless. His anger and frustration rising. His guilt over not being able to do anything for his brother and sister-in-law consuming him. Upon getting no response, he took the piece of paper form her hand and turned to leave only to be held back.

Stopping him by holding his arm, Vidya ordered," You are not going anywhere. The weather outside is very bad. I wouldn’t let you go anywhere. Give the prescriptions to the one who mean the world to him.”

Rohit’s anger flared, threatening to shatter everything around him. He looked at her with disgust. How can she even do this? She was meant to be a mother that had loved his brother a lot. But seeing her today like this, he felt dejected. Entire corridor was filled with silence. Even Abhira came out of her chain of thoughts upon hearing the venomous spit. Each and every member was filled with frustration. They knew she was pathetic. But to this extend, it was horrible. They looked at Vidya with disgusted glares. Abhira chuckled sadly, thinking how she was determined to reunite her Arman with this woman despite his warnings to not to. As she reached forward to take the prescription back, Ruhi blocked her way.

Blocking Abhira’s way, Ruhi stepped closer to Rohit, “The storm outside had calmed down then earlier Maa. And the medical store is not far away. Arman requires medicines and we need to get it to him at the earliest.”

To Rohit: “I’ll accompany you too Rohit.” Saying this she tugged at his arm gently, gesturing him to proceed.

Entire room stood shocked. They stared at Ruhi as if she had entered a prayer meet in a string bikini. Even Rohit looked stunned. Aryan pinched the person standing next to him to check whether it is real or not. Sanjay winced in pain at the sudden sting, bringing everyone to reality. Realizing him blunder, Aryan fled off for his life muttering sorry and stood behind his Dadi sa, the only one who could provide him a jeevandaan in the situation.