Falcon's Bane

Chapter 1

AAAAHHHHHHH!_Thud_ "That was a bad idea, angering that dragon"..._ROAR_ OH NO! _Gets up and runs_ _loses the angry dragon_ Phew! That was close- OUCH! Wait, is that a DRAGON EGG?! OMG×5 _jumps up and down_ _picks up dragon egg_ So cool! Wait, isn't this a BLAZEFALCON EGG!? OMG! Hunters:Get that girl! Oh no! _runs away with the dragon egg_

And that's how I met Blaze! I took care of him before he even hatched! Now, let's train your skills, shall we? _runs to the mountains_ Come on! _training starts_

As the sun began to set, casting a warm orange glow over the mountains, Yuvierra called out to Blaze, "I'll be right back, I need to work on something! Keep practicing, okay?" Blaze nodded, and Yuvierra jogged off toward a nearby clearing.

Blaze trained and trained and eventually got tired so he flew around a bit to stretch his wings, but he didn't notice that the Folifalcons had been watching from a distance. Falcon, the leader, sneered at Blaze. "Hey, loser! You think you can just train with your little human friend and become strong? We'll show you what real strength looks like!" The Folifalcons took to the skies, flying toward Blaze with menacing intent.

Blaze, sensing their approach, readied himself for battle. But the Folifalcons didn't attack. Instead, they followed him, their eyes fixed on the cave in the distance. Blaze's instincts told him to lead them away from the cave, but it was too late. The Folifalcons had already seen Blazer guarding the entrance.

Falcon sneered at Blaze. "So, you're hiding your little brother in the cave? How cute!" The other Folifalcons laughed, and Blaze's anger flared up. "What do you want now, Falcon?!" Falcon's grin grew wider. "We're just here to teach you a lesson... to never yell or talk back to me!" The Folifalcons closed in on Blaze, their sharp talons at the ready.

Meanwhile, Magnar was deep in thought, his mind consumed by worries about Blaze. "What is Blaze doing now? He isn't here..." MAGNAR! Magnar:What!? Stormer: What are you thinking about? Magnar: Nothing... But do you know where Blaze might be? Stormer: Ooohhhh! You have a soft spot for Blaze! _Magnar looks away_ Magnar: Wh-Whatever! Anyways, where is he really? _the others come over_ Stormer: I don't know exactly, but I think he was going to the cave his brother is guarding. _Magnar looks at the direction of the cave and heads there_

As Magnar approached the cave, he noticed Blazer curled up in a ball, looking scared and vulnerable. Magnar's expression softened, and he gently asked, "Blazer, what happened?" Blazer looked up at Magnar and pointed toward the forest. Magnar's eyes narrowed, and he followed Blazer's gaze into the forest.

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