In love with a weirdo (Major Editing)

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Lately I started to do something new which is writing in a blog but I'm not sure about it so I wrote a sample that I want to know what do you think about it
But please comment what you think it's so short and will take no time to read but I really need your help
The post (short story)

I'm going to tell you a story about a girl and a boy , this girl was so innocent and navie and he was wild and crazy but caring and loving at the same time..they met at school the first time she saw him she knew that he was different she felt like she met him before she didn't feel love she felt familiarity she felt safe with someone she just met

He knew she was different and fragile he treated her like a princess he wasn't sure whether he felt love or familiarity he was only sure that having her around is one of the best things that happened to him he promised her forever but he was scared of what tomorrow will bring

Months passed and their friendship grew stronger she loved him and he loved her but they were too scared to say it out loud he told his friends that she won't love some weird dude and she told her friends that who would fall for a girl who was so innocent and knew so little about cruelty of the world but both of the their friends told them that opposites do attract..

They didn't know that what is coming will break them forever and that broken glass don't get fixed..

Summer came and they both traveled to different places hoping that they won't grow apart this summer because they have nothing left in this world but each other..

He met new people , people that affected him forever he became someone else someone who wasn't willing to love an innocent girl it's a shame he didn't know that his girl isn't so innocent anymore and that life showed her so much in the past weeks that she wasn't able to remember how good loving him was

Summer is over and they are back but he couldn't look her in the eye neither did she but she still loved watching him she made sure that no one will know that she still care that he will always has a piece of her soul...On the other hand he felt empty he felt that no one is here for him that he lost the only one that truly loved him for what he was rather than what he became and for the first time in years he cried , he cried because he lost her he cried because it's too late to have her back he cried because he felt that he lost the sense of familiarity..

Pain and sorrow that's what they both felt , she cries herself to sleep every night because she lost the guy she love but never loved her back and he cries because he loved a girl who would never fall for a weirdo like him