Chapter Twenty

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01:47 a.m. – Crime-Scene Bullpen, San Antonio CSI
The overhead fluorescents had been dimmed to half-power for the skeleton crew, leaving long blue shadows draped across abandoned desks. Coffee rings ghosted the blotter paper beneath case folders, and the air smelled of highlighter ink, stale espresso, and a hint of gun-oil that clung to the duty gear stacked on the coat-tree.
Victoria stood hip-shot in front of the murder board — hands in the pockets of her field trousers, chin tilted, eyes razor-bright despite the hour. Red cotton string zig-zagged between mug-shots, cell-tower prints, and two morgue photos sealed in frosted sleeves. She’d trimmed every evidence tag herself into tidy rectangles; each push-pin sat at a perfect forty-five-degree cant.
Alan Cain planted a palm against the whiteboard frame and tapped a dry-erase marker rhythmically on the metal. “Marco Villanueva,” he said, rapping the marker once against the missing-person flyer, “goes dark three weeks ago, but his phone wakes up long enough to ping a tower across the street from Julian Rivas’s job site — exactly forty-eight hours before Rivas is dumped in the warehouse.”
Victoria’s brows knit. “Which means Marco was either scouting, delivering, or running.” She traced the thread from Rivas’s photo to a time-line Post-it. “If he sees something, he’s leverage. If he helped, he’s a liability. Either way, he’s breathing on borrowed oxygen.”
Alan opened his mouth to answer when the dispatch radio crackled overhead. Unit Two-Four, be advised: 10-92 at the Sand Dollar Motel. The room appears recently vacated. Possible ID: Marco Villanueva alias ‘Mark Vega’.
The two detectives shared a look—fatigue pushed to the back burner.

02:15 a.m. – Sand Dollar Motel, South Presa Street
The Sand Dollar squatted beneath a flickering neon sign, stucco walls the color of nicotine. Inside room 12, the air was thick with cigarette smoke and cheap air freshener. Victoria knelt by the sagging mattress, latex gloves snapping into place. A half-packed duffel sat open: one dress shirt still on the hanger, a prepaid burner phone with the battery popped, a single train ticket to Laredo dated yesterday — never used.
She clicked on her penlight, angling it across the bedside table. Three cigarette butts in the ashtray — different lip shadows on each filter. “He wasn’t alone,” she murmured, plucking one into an evidence envelope and sealing it with precise, square pressure. “DNA might give us company.”
Alan crouched at the bathroom door. “Gas receipt in the trash — two days old, same station near Rivas’s job site.” He glanced over. “Means the timeline holds. He topped off, met somebody, came here, then bolted.”
Victoria catalogued every toiletry in the sink basin, every stray fiber on the bath mat, before rising. “No blood. No struggle. He left under his own power — or someone convinced him to.” Her eyes flicked to the warped blinds. “He’s spooked.”
Alan’s phone buzzed. A text from surveillance: Motel perimeter quiet. No return. He exhaled. “We’re getting closer,” he said. “And running out of time.”
Victoria stripped off her gloves, folding them corners-to-center like origami. “Put out a BOLO on the train station, bus depot, and Highway 35 on-ramps. If Villanueva’s alive, fear is steering. We choke his exits.”

06:30 a.m. – Stewart Residence
First light seeped into Samantha’s bedroom, illuminating constellation stickers on the ceiling. Her alarm chimed soft piano chords, but she was already awake — sitting cross-legged on the floor, looping her goggle straps through tight pony-tail loops the way Coach Ramirez had shown her. Nerves fluttered, but in her stomach, not her chest; the chest was calm, ready.
A text pinged:
Dylan: “Morning, Fish. Got your caffeine hostage. Don’t be late.”
She grinned, thumb-typed back:
Sam: “Just keep it upright, Clumsy.”
Shoes laced, sunflower pin fixed to her bag, she slipped out, leaving a Post-it for her mom on the coffeemaker: Good luck today. The water’s my friend.

07:00 a.m. – Don Rosen High Pool Deck
Humidity wrapped around the natatorium like a thick blanket; the chlorine tang prickled Samantha’s sinuses in the most comforting way. Students clustered at the edge, adjusting caps and shaking out limbs. Coach Ramirez’s clipboard slapped against his palm, each clap like a starter pistol.
Dylan waited with two coffees balanced on the railing. His grin widened as Samantha approached. “Two-to-one odds you break a school record,” he teased, handing over her cup.
She arched a brow. “Gambling’s illegal on school property.”
“That’s why the odds are so good,” he shot back.
When her name was called, she stepped onto block 4. Remember to exhale on entry; feel the catch; head down, hips high. The whistle shrilled. She dove—knife-clean, barely a splash. The lane became a silent tunnel, bubbles thunderstorming past her ears. Flip-turn, streamline, kick. On the final 50, she knew she was ahead; the water around her was empty of competitors.
Hand hit pad. Electronic beep. She surfaced to Coach’s wide-eyed stare. “1:01.42,” he barked. “Varsity automatic. Trials are over for you, Stewart.”
She climbed out, chest heaving, joy rushing through veins hotter than lactic acid. Dylan clapped loudest, coffee forgotten. In that roar of pool pumps, Samantha felt the world lock into focus—clear, anchored.

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