⌞Recommendations for improvement⌝ While the tension between Charlotte and Jasper is well-crafted, the story risks feeling predictable if it follows the standard beats of a love triangle or a last-minute wedding confession. The emotional stakes are high, but they need to be matched with depth in Jasper's character-does he still love Charlotte, or is she truly too late? Without a compelling exploration of his emotions, the story risks being a one-sided heartbreak rather than a fully realized, poignant love story.
