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Till my heart stops beating Louis Tomlinson

"You don't know you're beautiful!" They all sang in the mic. I smiled and clapped as the boys all looked at me. "What?! It was amazing!" I said. Louis smiled at me. "Well,it gets better" niall shrugged. "Okay? You ready boys?!" Louis shouted and an upbeat tune came on. "Hey girl I'm waiting on ya! I'm waiting on ya! Come on and let me sneak you out!" Liam sang and I sang along gibberish! "And live while we're young!" Zayn finished. They all stood up from their seat and got a bottle of water. "That was good!" I said. Louis fake sad "good?" He said "okay" I rolled my eyes "very good" I said again. They were done recording for the day. So we all went home. Hi I'm Juliet, like Romeo and Juliet but I don't commit suicide and I don't know my Romeo? But I am In love with a certain Doncaster man. Harry looks at me weirdly. Oh and harry styles is my brother (blush) . "I'm fine haz" I said. He just gave me a dimpled smile.

"Hey Juliet!" Josh sing songs. "What now josh?" I said. Josh Devine was my best friend and rant partner at the moment. "Wait for me" he pouted. I chuckled. Oh I have such a happy family. We hopped into the van where harry was driving. Swerving jokingly here and there. We sang along to random songs and so did harry closing his eyes feeling every beat.

"HOOOONK!" Something honked. I opened my eyes and saw that we were about to crash "HARRY!!!" I squealed and harry opened his eyes trying to direct us out of there. "CRAASH!" Shattered glass wounded me and my 'family'.

I opened my eyes and saw that we were on the road I shook my head trying to wake myself up. I tried to stand up and succeeded. I looked to my right and saw harry. I crawled over to him. My leg felt rather cranky. "Haz!" I said shaking him. He had blood on his curls and a broken wrist but nothing too major. Since the car hit the right side. He opened his eyelids and saw me. He stood up alarmed "Juliet! Are you okay?" He said surveying my face with his hands "I'm fine" I said and he pulled me into a warm hug "I'm sorry Jules" he said hugging me tighter "don't worry haz, let's find the others" I said. He nodded. I stood up and my head pounded. I touched my forehead finding a red gooey liquid. Blood. "Jules?" Harry said I looked at him and everything turned black "JULES!" Harry shouted

"Beep...beep..." I opened my eyes slightly "Jules!" Someone shouted "harry?" I mumbled. "Harry's in another room getting his wrist checked" he said. When my vision cleared I saw it was actually josh. "What happened to harry? Louis? Liam? Niall? Zayn?" I said "they're fine" then josh looked down "what's wrong?" I said "lou is kinda in a coma?" He said. I let out a sad sigh. "I wanna see him" I said. Louis was in a coma? Oh he was on the passenger's seat in the front. I liked Louis for so long since I met him. Josh nodded and got a nurse to put me in a wheelchair. They wheeled me to Harry's first. "Hey Jules!" He said while the doctor wrapped a bandage around his wrist. I gave him a small smile. I hugged him. "How are you?" He said "I'm quite okay. They said I could come out tomorrow. You?" I said "same" he smiled. He looked at my leg and frowned "haz!" I said and his head whipped up "stop it! It's not your fault!" I said. He just gave me a one sided smile. "Thanks" he said referring to how I made him feel better. The doctor gave harry a squeeze telling him that it was already okay. They wheeled me to the other boys who was okay as well and can leave the hospital in a few short minutes of check up. Finally, I went to Louis. I mean, I know we had no relationship but seeing him like this, hurts me.. In fact, he is my best friend after all!

"We saw this by his pocket," a nurse said handin me a note. I smiled dismissively and clasped the note in my hands. I opened it and saw Louis' handwriting.

Dear Juliet

Time has always been the best to me Jules. Time with the boys, time doing what I love, time with you. I tried making my intentions very clear throughout the years but nothing seemed to take action, so here I am writing this letter. Cheesy! And I know you don't like cheesy but it seems as if I have no choice. I love you Jules. Always had always will. You must be asking yourself "as a friend right?" But no. As more than aa friend. I wish you can see

Love, mr. Tomlinson.

I clasped the note tighter in my hands and hugged it to my chest. So all along, Louis loved me and I loved Louis?

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I wrote this fanfic a year back so you can see that my writing style is slightly different.

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