Heyy Yall . Im Going To Try To Write A Little More But I Had to Take A Break . I Had Writers Block And I Wasn't Getting Any Feed Back Which Lead To No Updates.No Feed Back = No Updates
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Also Check Out My Other Stories " I'll Kill Him " & " Who's Party Is It ? "
I'll Kill Him is a Story about a girl and he drama between her boyfriend and the music group she's in who gets signed to young money . They are a group of Misfits . . All boys and one girl who raps. And you never expect for crazy things to happen at random . . Like kidnapping , fighting, & getting shot . But that's all ima say you guys gotta go read it . It was my first book . Let me know what you think . .
Who's Party Is It ? is a book about a annually spring break party gone wrong . This party gets thrown every year for spring break and some one is randomly selected to throw this party and try to beat the person from last year, but the catch is you don't know who's throwing it until the last day of the party . But this year . . there's a murder , then another . So now they have to figure out " Who's Party Is It? " . Go check that out for me guys . .
Okaye now back to Well Done.
*Note = I changed Matt name to Mac . Matt=Mac
Last Chapter . . .
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•••••••••• Toya's POV •••••••••
I been on the sideline eating and watching these crazy ass people I call family attempt to kill each other on the go kart track. Its the funkiest shit I ever seen. I wish I could be out there with them but right about now. . I prefer to sit here and eat.. This baby got me feeling like I'm super high with only the muchies effect Lol. I'm always eating. And since Manny is on the track I'm sneaking in all junk food before he comes back and makes me start eating healthy again.
Dont get me wrong . I wanna eat healthy and make sure me and the baby is healthy but dang. . every now in then me and the baby need something sweet. And it's not even my appetite , it's the baby's so how come I can't each what I want * pouts * . But it's Okaye. . I gotta slight secret stash at home hidden away from him for when I wanna take a break from " eating healthy " .
I was snapped outta my thoughts when I heard someone screaming on the track.
I looked up to see every body had gotten out of their go karts and was running towards the finish line on foot. . Bruh, I swear it was the funniest shit I have ever seen. They never play fair. .
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New Chapter !!
***** Manny's POV *****
Family ! Most families go out to have a nice little family day out. You know . . get on rides together , eat cotton candy all happy, laugh and taking pictures.
Welp !!
Not my family . .
Right now my so called family was all beating the hell out of each other trying to be the first one to the finish line .
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Well Done
Teen FictionA 18 year old guy named Ques from Florida, he's a cool , funny , and your average half thug. He's well known because both this parent are rich . And he knows how to kick it. His older brother Manny is 20 and Ques and Manny got a tight relationship...