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*** Ques POV ***

" Ayo Mack , You see that girl right there ? " I asked him smiling

' Yea I see her, why? ' He replied

" Bro I dare you to try to go talk to her, but you have to approach her like Chris Brown did in that ' Excuse Me Miss Video " .

Me , Manny , Bryan Charles & Lou all laughed at what I had just said.

Mack just told there watching us laugh.

' Ooh , So that's funny ? ' he said smiling

I don't know why he didn't laugh at it he like getting dared to do dumb things. He always was the one person who didn't care who or what was watching when he felt like doing some thing stupid.

. . Bryan laughed harder , ' Ayee I bet you $5 if you do it '.

' Bet ! , Easy money for me. '

" But if she starts to walk off you still have to follow her still singing. " I added

He gave me that look

' Man y'all know I don't like singing around people I don't know , Y'all always trying to set a nigga up ' .

' Think about not this way , Maybe yo singing will win her over ' . Charles played

' You never know it might just work thou ' .

' Yea , Maybe she can be that girl you fall inlove with so you can stop messing with these hoes. ' Manny added on to what Lou said

I laughed hard as fuck

" Man y'all know Mack don't love these hoes . Mack you better tell em "

' Trueee , You ain't Neva lied bro . ' We shook hands

Lou interrupted , ' Sooo you gone do this bet or what ? You need to hurry up before they leave with yo heavy head ass '

Mack fixed his collar and began to walk toward the girl standing by the edge of the water talking to her friends. This was set up almost just like the video except we were on a beach .

We all watch close ad as he began to sing and the look on the girls face was ... Priceless !!

' Excuse me miss I saw you from across the room '

We heard this nigga all the way over here and we couldn't help but laugh at his ass. '

We was all sitting on Manny's car but some how ended up in the sand from laughing at Mack

When me and my niggas hang all we do is kick it . We all like brothers even thou Manny is my only real brother and he's 2 years older than me which makes him 20.

Me , Mack , and Lou are all 18. Bryan's 19 and Charles is 20 too. Lou is our cousin he moved here with us.

Mack is our neighbor his family got money. But im not sure of what his parents do yet. When we got here he showed us around here when we first moved, and thats how we were introduced to Bryan and Charles.

It just so happen that all of us stay on the same block and everyone has a big house cause some how we all got money.

Me and Manny are originally from Atlanta, Georgia But we moved here when Manny wanted to start up his own clothing line.

I moved here with him because i was tired of the ATL and I always wanted to go to Florida. And Lou and I wanted to help him out. Our parents aren't dead or nothing its just they let us branch off but we always go back to visit . . . Well sometimes.

My mom use to be a famous model. Her name is Cloe Diaz. She did all type of modeling, swimsuit , runway , cover of magazines and all that other type of modeling girls do that I dont know about. But she still models from time to time. But Diaz is her last name from before she married my dad.

My dad is a famous music producer. His name is Tony Evans. He produced for everybody who's anybody out here in the music buisness.

So you can say our family is rich as fuck.

Charles pints into the direction of Mack .

' He coming back ' , As he said between laughs.

" So what happen ? " I asked gettin up out the sand.

' She told me my voice turned her on. '

This nigga got coky af after he said that.

He reached into his pocket and pulled out some paper.

' She gave me her number too '. he said with the biggest smile

' Ayeeee ' , we all cheered.

' Thats my lil homie ' Bryan greeted him

. . ' You luh dudes hungry ? ' Manny asked while touching his stomach

Fuck Yes . Lou replied

' Yo lets go to the crib and just order out so we can get ready for this party later on too. ' Mack suggested.

Let's Go !

We all got back into Manny's all black truck and went back to the crib.

' Tonight is going to be very interesting. Toya said she got something to tell me. ' It look like Manny was thinking about what it could be when he said this.

Toya and Manny been dating for about 6months now. They try to keep there relatiionship out of the public eye because since both our parents are famous cameras seem to always appear.

Toya's parents are both actors in really big movies.

10mins later we arrive at the house and order the pizza.

Man I gotta feeling that tonight is going to be crazy as fuck . . .

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