Revenge "2"

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Evil, when minds hacks

Leads losses to the doom

It sticks in heads like tacks

And darkens our lustrous rooms

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When we stop being nice

Hate fills a weak soul

Good, is to add some spice

So we feel the tasty droll

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Killing does not help at all

Things would get even worse

Instead of beating we shall

Be merciful when writing verse

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To those who left you, hurt

Kill them with your sweetness

They have thrown you in dirt

Better is to show some kindness

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Hey guys, so this poem criticises the last one I published which is "Revenge 1" hope you liked it and thanks for voting, comments will be awesome (:

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