Betrayal (discontinued)

chapter 5

I followed the unknown scent for a few minutes untill I reached a bramble Bush.

I heard a twig breaking and I saw ears and a tail to me it looked rather like a small deer maybe a doe due to the lack of antlers.
I creeped closer my dark tail kepted close to the ground flicking the dried leaves in excitement.
Getting into a low crouch I pushed myself toward the intruder concentrating on putting each paw down slowly not making a sound.
Lungeing forward I pounced on the infiltrator making him or her yelp in surprise.
Pinning him her down I realised that it was a fellow fox only that he was a slightly larger breed and he had a dark grey pelt with a amber eyes.
Coming back to my senses I let out a low growl and hiss combined.
"Who are you?! Explain your self or I'll slit your throat right here right now."
He gave me a are you fucking serious look
"Speak."I said pushing my claws deeper into his neck drawing a small beads of blood
The tod managed to choke out a few words
"We..ell you could start by not choke..eing me kid!"
I twinge at his remark I hop off ears flattened.
"For your information I'm not a kid I'm a fricking sixteen!"
"Well I'm seventeen so any one who's younger than me qualify as a kid in my book..any way ma names Alfie and you are?"
I just stould there dumbfounded in my human form not expecting to have a conversation with him.
"Well?..you gonna tell me ye name?"
"Ash. mah names Ash." Alfie nodded and looked around and ruffled his hair leading me to realise that I haven't noticed that he had also changed.
He wore a navy hoodie a neck lace with a shark tooth hanging from it he also wore torn genes like mine only they where more like black shorts than genes.
He had short dark silver hair almost black and he had a sky blue and lapis coloured highlight his hair was also fairly scruffy and spikey look like a cross between emo and typical spiked up teen boy hair.
-Man he's cute as fuck!-I thought to my self I quickly shook my head getting the thought out my head
"You still haven't answered my question..why are you in my camps territory..?"
H

e let out a huff at my question with a quick eye roll.
"Ugh I should have known this would've happen you downward fort soldiers are so perdictible..."

Alfie's POV (OMFG some one else's pov!!!!!!)

It was kinda funny how Ash reacted to my stereotype joke.
Her eye twitched offended I could tell well I better not tell a joke about her again she may decapitate me!
I started to get bored now in a awkward silence.
Finally I broke the silence.
"Well...Can I go now the suns going down my camp will start
To become consurne-"before I could finish Ash cut me off speaking with hostility growing in her voice.
"Answer the question and don't say that again so I will decapitate you."
Haha I knew she's so predictable it hurts my God....but I better tell her cause I wanna live for another day...
"Fine you got me I was dared by my mates to hunt in your territory or they'll mock me and take away my rations..."
I felt a huge wave of regret saying it to her she's so gonna fucking laug-
"Oh..I see so your 'mates' are more of bullies?"
"Erm yea....maybe.."
I sighed it felt go to finally tell someone.
"Well if that's the case then take one prey and leave to prove your worth to the bullies...and leave and don't come I don't like seeing good people get hurt..."
Ash took two steps pulling her hood up before turning around again.
"By the way I know what it's like to be mistreated by people.."
She said that before running of leavening me in pure shock I did not expect any of this shit to happen.

(Sorry if the chapters are short I'm a newbie at writing book ^~^'')