Okay, so I don't know how to say this...
See, I know in recent chapters people are missing Jack and Naina's scenes. Which I understand you all love their moments, especially romantic ones...
But let me tell you something.
Now they are not in New York, where they could touch each other whenever they want. Without thinking someone will catch them.
Now they are in India...and in India it's not possible... They can't do this whenever they want because no one leaves them alone to have a moment together.
Also, Naina is not alone now; she lives with her parents in a small house, not in a big bungalow where hundreds of rooms are empty so they could do anything.
Jack can't touch her like he used to do in New York.
Imagine if I show her parents are at home and Jack goes to her room and starts making out without thinking her parents are sitting outside.
When we all know how Indian parents give importance to the privacy of their child...😮💨😮💨
That's too when they just shift to a new house where the whole house is filled with things to settle.
It will sound illogical, right?
Also in recent chapters so many serious things happened.
First house shifting
Then her relatives' drama
Then her father's health
Uff...
So would you like it if I showed some make-out moments when she is dealing with so much in her life?
In my story I'm not just showing romance... By this I'm trying to show how an independent girl suffers in her daily life.
I'm talking about me.
I'm talking about you.
See, if you want smut, then I can just give smut but with logic.
I can't show when her father is on a hospital bed and she is making out with him in the hospital.
Because I don't find this good, and I never write, which I never find good.
I hope you all will understand my point on this.
One moment people say no one is writing stories; they are just writing illogical smut without any improvement in character in the story. Then they say this.
About the serial vibe thing, then I think it's because now I'm showing the story from Naina's POV.
Where the male lead is not torturing people every other chapter
Where the female lead sometimes overshadows the male lead.
Dark romance ke naam pe bas romance nhi dikha rahi hu...
And many more
Ughh...
Anyway, I hope you understood my point on this...
Bye, happy reading.
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