Fallen Demon

my first encounter !>~<

So as I stood for the first time before the metal gate that would introduce me to a whole new world and environment . Hesitant as i was , i took a step forward when ,a sudden rustle of tree leave caught my attention . I glanced in the direction of the sound ; it was seconds before a huge shadow fell upon my figure, My demon instinct allowed me to make a quick jump to the side .
BOUF (suppose to b the sound wen sumtng falls ) !!
Looking closely , It was a guy , his face was frozen with fear for some reason . I was about to stretch out my hand to help him up when I heard a growl from behind me . Just before I could fully turn around , a huge paw swept me up and slammed me up a wall . It all happened so fast that I didn't even steal a full glance at the demon . So picking myself of the ground I gave the demon my full attention , it was a hell hound about 8'9". My mum used to tell me stories of how fierce hell hounds are , but she said they usually remain in a normal dog form until attacked .... so the guy must have done something to irritate it. Mum said they have the ability to spit fire some times , but judging from what I've seen so far I highly doubt it .
The guy was still on the ground , I think he must have fainted due to shock or something . I took my eyes of the dude and looked around ..... The hound was no where to be seen . Confused I made a random dash towards the boy . He had passed out just as I thought . Forgetting about my surrounding , I knelt down to wake him up . My senses once again alerted me , i leaped to the left and avoided being crushed to death . The hound seemed much bigger all of a sudden! He was about to slam his paw over the guy , boy he sure must have , pissed the hound a hell lot . Acting as fast as I could I pulled the guys legs dragging him about a a couple of inches away from the impact of the slam .
I lifted my head up to find the hound missing again . There was a sudden gust of hot air that hit me from behind , i turned only to get a huge growl . Now the hound had grown even bigger ! It's drool fell from its drooping mouth acidifying and decentegreating the cement apon which it fell . It lifted his paw and i was sure thing were gonna hurt like hell . He bought his paw down in full force ! And i imedately shut my eyes waiting for impact ....
DUGH !!!! I felt the ground quake but no pain . Confused as hell i opened one eye to peek , the hound was still there . Turning to my right were the paw seemed to have landed i found black blood splashed all over .
The hound added a little more force and there was a squiggle . Suddenly all the blood evaporated leaving a huge patch of completely shattered ground after the hound withdrew his hand . I knew i was next so i tried making a quick get away only to be stopped by the hounds tail which landed right on me , dropping me to the ground with it on me !
I tried squirming to get out of the grasp , but it was really heavy !. I tried again but this time i felt the weight on me suddenly withdraw . I took the opportunity the pick myself up fast and turned only to find the hound returned into its dog form ; he looked up at me .
"Well a simple thank you would be nice , u don't have to stare at me !" My eyes widened !!!○▪○ . I blinked a couple of times and rubbed my eyes , I wondered if I was smashed and now experiencing afterlife .
"Good Satan !! Did I hit u too hard ???" I slapped myself ! "Wait u can talk !!??? " I asked completely shocked . " you don't say genius !!". "Okay....."I replied somewhat convinced . "You really must have hit your head ! I just saved you from being devoured !! I killed the hollow .. ring a bell ??"
OK so now I was utterly clueless .."what the heck are you talking about ?!? " I inquired scratching my head . He sighed ..."OK so I was passing by when I smelt a sudden demon sent , I turned to sniff it out when I found the hollow , who had taken a human form !, he seemed to be staring at something , which I soon realised was you !. He was about to approach you when me being as kind as I am decided to save you , for which you were totally ungrateful and tried to help him ! I transformed and attacked him before he could attack u ... and here u are standing alive !! ALL THANKS TO ME !!!" He said stressing on the last part ...
I kinda managed to wrap my brain around what happened when my chain of thought was broken by the hound "so what are you exactly ? I sense two forms, a demon and something else I can't figure out . "
"Half demon half angel ...."I said trying to get back into my mind . "SURE !!and I'm half hound half mermaid !!>◇< he said laughing away . "I'm serious !!" I said getting ticked off by his unbelief . "All jokes aside kid ! Demons and angels can never live in harmony , there's no way u can be both !, plus the only demon who love an angel died in the realm war , so -" I cut him off before he could finish "ya , he's my dad !Mahou-sa was his name " . The hound went wide eyed and after a second squinted them " prove it ! " not willing to take it anymore I decided to do a demon takeover (a/n demon takeover is demon form which either a demon or half demon can posses to unleash their true power .... I don't noe if it's understandable .. but I hope you get the picture >~<) . I chanted and slowly felt the power unravel . My tail and dragon wings came out along with my horns !
"OK so your half demon what about and angel part " the hound said not satisfied , I rolled my eyes and was about to transform again when I got the feeling we was being watched , and I guess so did the hound . I turn back into human and looked around, so did the hound . After about a couple of minutes the feeling wore off . The hound was still on guard . I looked around again and for the first time I realised the road was completely empty , then it hit me I was an hour late for school when I arrived , so now I was damn late !!!!!!
"Shit !!! OK I gotta go ! I Late For My First Day !,!!!"I yelled . Which startled the hound . I dashed passed the gate when I heard the hound say "hey you should really be on your guard you noe ! If you really are a mix then I can assure you things might get rough !"
"Ya ya .... I'll be careful , see u around if I ever see you that is " I said as I turned back to get into school ....
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In a nearby tree stood a dark tall figure , following the girl with his eyes , as she enter her new school .....

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OK so I really want to know what you guys thought of my first chapter ..... I noe I'm kinda bad at writing stories and I always lose what I have in mind ...... so please please tell me OK ! Oh and this is my first book by the way .... so I really wanna noe !