Now That I've Got That Out... (First Draft of CP 3)

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This is how Chapter 3 would've gone if I didn't change it.
The trees around me were covered in ice and frost, the wind howled in my ears as clouds covered the sky. Snow swirled around me as I laid on the ground, screaming as the ice inside me froze me. I was breathing heavily as tears streamed down my cheeks and froze.
Activate 3rd Person!
Elsa pushed herself to stand on her knees, letting the snow hit her face, as all it did was freeze upon contact. Her cloak had flown off as the wind pushed against her, trying to push her back to the ground.
Something built inside her, and she kept building it up until it hurt her to the point where she could no longer hold. Her arms spread behind her and her head tilted back, making her look up at the sky as she released the ice within her heart, letting go of all the pain and sorrow. The wall she had built around her heart crumbled to the ground in an instant.
Tear marks could be seen on her cheeks and temples, her voice was gone from the screaming and crying, her braid was still intact with dirt and leaves in it, her breathing slowed as the end came.
(In case you're confuzzled, she had to to break the wall in order to free herself from the ice in her. That's what was hurting her in the chapter before this)
She stood up, feeling weak as she did. Her hands shook as the rest of her body shook from the cold.
Elsas pov
"Help me" I whispered and collapsed, letting the darkness overcome me.
Now, you may be wondering: CutieCake! If you're gonna switch to her point of view and knock her out? My response?: Hold on lovelies! I have something in store :p
I was floating in the water, it was calm and still. All I cold see was the sun rays that floated with the water. There was no land in sight, just endless water. As I held my breath, I began trying to swim to the surface, but it seemed as if something was holding onto my waist forbidding me to leave. I turned around, seeing a line of dark sand going down into the bottomless pit of water. I looked down to my waist to see it wrapping around my entire body slowly. I started panicking, kicking my feet around and trying to tear the silky sand off of me with no avail. I gave up and looked into the dark blue waters to see something swimming towards me. I couldn't get away, so I had to watch it get closer and closer to me. It had long coal black hair swaying behind it, it's skin was grey, the eyes were a terrifying yellow, a dress swayed around it. It was pitch.
"You're going to die, so are those guardians. You'd better leave before you get hurt petty girl" she said, swimming behind me.
I squeezed my eyes shut as I felt something on my neck.
"Told you I'd be back" She whispered into my ear.
My eyes shot open as she swam in front of me and smiled evily.
"Miss me?" She asked, running her finger down my cheek, cutting it as she did. I whimpered and she smiled, tilting her head slightly.
"You know, as Elsa Snow, I thought you be tougher than this. Oh yes! I must've forgot, you're fear of deep water"
It's all just a dream. It's not real.
"Oh honey! This is as real as it gets" she swayed her hands, showing off the dark waters.
It-Its not real.
The water began to sway back and fourth, almost as if we're in a pool. I looked around, seeing golden whales, seahorses, fish, even little baby sharks. I looked down to see the sand over both my arms, legs, and torso. All that was left was my neck and head.
A golden dolphin swam in front of me, bobbing its head up and down happily. Pitch got circled by large golden sharks, backing her away from me. As she got farther, the sand disappeared. I took my chance and swam to the surface with the help of the dolphin. My vision blurred as we got closer and closer to the surface, as I broke the surface of the water, everything went black.
~Leedle Leedle Leedle Le~
I woke up to see the star filled night sky, along with the half moon above me. I sat up, seeing the same trees as before. If Sandy isn't here.... then how did that golden sand get into my dream?
I rubbed my face. Ohhh mah gosh that feels good :D It's like, when you first wake up and rub your face, it's just.... ahhh.
I stood up and brushed the dirt off my clothes and hair. I had to let my braid down because of the leaves!
"I've gotta get back, but I dunno where I am. Uhm, Oh! I tell the wind to take me!" I said to myself, brushing my hair around.
~Lator (Totally a spongebob narrator)~
"Stupid wind!" I yelled as I got dropped onto the balcony of the workshop. It sped up and pushed me off the ledge. I gained my balance and floated in the air "Stop! You're being a jerk!" I yelled, pointing at the sky.
I have to entertain myself somehow...
Back to the mission! I flew back into the balcony and walked inside Santa's office. Yes, Santa's office.
Though, he wasn't in here. Maybe he is in the globe room?
I walked around his desk full of ice sculptures and to the door.
It's kinda creepy in there D:
I opened the door to see him, tooth, bunny, white hair, merida, punzie and Sandy standing around a pedestal that had risen from the ground. I quickly hid behind a large pillar and watched silently.
"Manny is choosing a new guardian!" Tooth fairy squealed, holding her arms close to her chest.
Oh, so he has time to choose new guardians, but not talk to me? Real nice.
"We already have a enough!" Bunny cried out, holding his head in his palms.
I lightly giggled at his current state.
"Let's just find out who it is guys" White hair said. I've gotta admit, he's kinda cute.
"I wonder who it will be" Merida said, holding onto a blushing Hiccup.
The pedestal emitted a bright light, I put my hand up to shield my eyes.
I gasped at the figure that was shown on the pedestal.
It-Its gotta be a mistake!
"White haired girl? We don't even know if she's alive!" Bunny said, agrivated.
"Does..... Anyone know her name?" Santa asked. Okay, hurtful!
"Nobody really knows, because nobody has seen her" Tooth Fairy said.
"Well, we have to find her" Merida said.
I didn't listen anymore, I started running along the walk way leading to a stairwell.
"There she is!" White hair said.
"Jack! Go get her! We're right behind you" so it's Jack? As in... the Jack Frost?
I flew up the stairs as I heard running footsteps behind me. I looked to my left to see Jack floating in the air beside the railing. He smirked and wiggled his fingers.
Bad move frost.
I kept running and wiggled my fingers, creating an ice shield on the railing all the way to the top, disabling him to get in.
"Nice try Frost!" I yelled and neared a window. So, break the window or get captured without doing something cool.... I think I'll let them catch me, but not before I do something cool! I ran up all of the stairwells, stopping a few times to let them catch up. Once I got to the top, I stopped at a ledge.
"You think you can catch me this easily?" I giggled as they got closer to me "You can't catch me this easily, it wouldn't be fun if you did" I smiled and backed towards the ledge.
"Jack" Tooth fairy said as he gripped his staff tighter.
"All of you" I pointed at all of them, putting my foot in the air behind me "Are so.... Un-fun!" I stepped off, making them gasp and cringe. I laughed and created a thick layer of ice behind me.
I lifted my arms up beside me "Loosen up! It's not like I'm going to fall"
"You need to get back over here!" Santa said, pointing at the ground in front of him. I was about 5 feet away from them.
"Santa, c'mon" I said and melted the ice in front of me, only leaving the ice below me. How I'm doing it? I don't know.
Frost stepped towards me, but before he could come closer sandy stopped him.
Oh c'mon. He knows I will not disobey him.
"Sandy, c'mon! I'm just having a little fun. How bad is that?" I said and pouted.
A few fairies flew in through the roof, flying towards tooth. Baby tooth wasn't with them.
"Wait! W-Where's baby tooth?" I asked, looking at the roof.
"How do you know baby tooth?" Tooth fairy asked, flying towards me very fast "Did you take her?" She asked, glaring at me.
"If I took her why would I ask where she was!" I hissed, stomping my foot as I stepped towards her.
"Maybe because YOUR ice was on MY palace!" She yelled, getting closer to me.
"Guys stop" Merida said.
"No no. Let the bat talk!" I hissed, pointing at her and crossing my arms.
"Hey! I am not a bat! I'm the tooth fairy!" She said, standing on the ice and putting a finger on my chest harshly "Not a loner immortal with no purpose"
I lightly gasped and tears brimmed my eyes, I stepped back as snowflakes danced around me.
She looked shocked at what she said, but quickly hid it by flying back to her group. Sandy waved his arms up and down, trying to calm me down as he flew towards me and stood beside me, motioning for me to kneel down, I did and he hugged me lightly and patted my back.
"Sandy, I don't belong here" I whispered, laying my head on his shoulder.
I pushed his arms away lightly and stood up, smiling down at him. He shook his head and had a panicked look.
"If I have no purpose then why did Manny choose me to be a guardian?" I asked, jumping off the ice and landing beside the pedestal "See that? That's me. Elsa Snow" I pointed at it "So I would say I have a purpose Tooth Fairy"
Realizing what I had just said, I backed away from the pedestal and crossed my arms over my chest. I lowered my head and looked down at my feet.
"I-I'm sorry" I whispered and continued to look down. I heard the patter of footsteps on the stairs.
"You're sorry? Girl that was amazing! I've never seen anyone stand up to tooth!" Bunny said as he laid a hand... or paw on my shoulder.
"So Elsa Snow eh?" Merida said, punching my shoulder lightly. I giggled as my arms fell (Off). I looked up and smiled, seeing everyone standing in front of me.
"I think it's a cool name!" Punzie said, putting her hands under her chin and sighing.
Jack just kind of... I don't know, stared at me in a very dreamy way. He must be thinking of his girlfriend.
*Sigh*
"Elsa Snow, nice name" Someone with a gottee (Correct me if I'm wrong) and short brown hair stepped in front of me "The names rider. Flynn Rider" He gave me this... this constipated smile.... it's kinda weird....
"Flynn! C'mon!" Punzie giggled and pulled him back.
In a very un convincing fake voice he says "Oh! Rapunzle I didn't see you there" He laughed and kissed her nose.
I smiled and giggled like a little fangirl.
"Well, I would love to stay n' chat, but I've gotta fly! Not so important fake meetings I have to attend. Ya' know, the fake buisnessy type of stuff" I said and wiggled my fingers "Bye!"
1 hour later.....
"Okay! I just did all of this, and now it's being taken down!?" I yelled to myself "UNACCEPTABLE!!!!!!!!!!!" (Like this if you get the reference!)
It's like... you work on something for 100 YEARS and it gets destroyed! I just wish they wouldn't have gotten use to my DIY chick-fa-lay billboard.... I made a video and everything on how to make it! Even though it's only gotten like.... 1 view, it's still awesome! And that one view was from bunny cause he can actually see me!
*Inhale*
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*Exhale*
Now that I've got that out... Bye!!!!
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That's it for this chapter. I'm thinking about not doing these at the end of chapters anymore? I don't know, we'll see :p
Goodbye my Lovelies!
(2158 words)

I'm so keeping that right there.
Goodbye my little Muffins!

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