I know you've been waiting forever for me to write a finchel book for you, Analy. So here it is. Hahas. It's just a short prologue to get you introduced. It'll get better soon. (I hope.) :D
~ Prologue ~
"What is your problem? You say you don't like the necklace I bought you last time, so I'm buying you another one. What do I fucking have to do to satisfy you?!" Josh shouted.
"What's my problem? And you're really asking me that question?" Rachel defended.
The pair stood in the middle of the mall arguing, because Rachel just couldn't stop complaining about not getting the best treatment. Some people began to gather around the two; others decided to videotape the whole thing.
"Okay. You know what? Just shut up. I don't need this from you." Rachel said, turning to walk away from her problems again.
"Yeah? Where are you gonna go? You can't go back to your family. You have nobody." Josh smirked. He was right. Rachel didn't have anybody. She only had her boyfriend Josh.
She turned around and walked back right into Josh's face.
"You know what?" Rachel said sternly.
"What?" Josh asked, pretending to be scared.
"Your breath is what. Your breath smells like the sewers combined with a truck loaded with durian, sprinkled with rotten cheese, and then topped a tint of raw, slimy fish." Rachel, yet again, pointing out every flaw specifically with her critic's voice.
This was Rachel's problem. She was very straightforward and a perfectionist when it comes to everything. If something wasn't right, she had to say something.
"Fuck you bitch. We're over!" Josh shouted.
"No. You don't get to say we're over. I do. We're over!" she screamed. The ex-couple stood there glaring into each others eyes.
"You know... You really are the girl of critics." Josh said plainly, and walked away.
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Girl of Critics (Finchel Fanfic) **Discontinued
أدب المراهقينRachel Berry is an arrogant, selfish, greedy, and very self-centered girl, to the point where her family kicks her out of the house. All the past boyfriends she's had left and no one cares about her anymore. No one except Finn. As she finds out how...
