This is a new storyof mine.... I'm not sure if ishould continue but I'm going to post the first few chapters and let people decide for me.
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Opening:
The four empires all strived for peace, but it was never accomplished because of the yearn for power from the Fire relm. The Fire relm was in a constant battle for power with the Water islands.
The Water islands were a small system of islands, but was one of the most powerful domains.
The people were proud and trusted in their strong leader Chief Aonghus. He had a very couragoues wife named Nadette. Nadette and Aonghus had two beautiful twins named Anahita and Airavata. The whole nation looked upon these children of water and saw that Airvata, their male child, would become a great chief one day.
Years in the future both of the children have grown and Airvata has taken the position of chief. Anahita was a very beautiful woman with many suitors, but she favored only one man. The only man she shouldn't. His name was Zus, he was a highly placed noble in the Fire Relm, and close friends with the king.
Secretly they saw eachother and soon Anahita was pregnet with a child. She found out Zus was being forced to marry soon so she went back to her village to have the child before returning. She left her brother with custody and went back to Zus. Zus had already married, like she thought, and he killed Anahita. Anahita's dying wish was that he never found out about their child. She would be a great threat to nations. Little did she know that he already knew.
16 years later the child, Alivia, has grown up and will find out her past.
This is her story...