RISE MY LORD!

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(ZANE is THINKING TO HIMSELF) Ahhh.What a great day for a morning run. I may have been abandoned as a child, thrown around grown up in weird rural areas, I finally built the life I wanted. Now I work as a manager under United Bank, the world's universal bank.

Zane looked back at Shanda, his girlfriend, who was running beside him in Forte Green Park. Zane  turned around, smiling with ease.

I  have found my love Shanda. I recently met her. Before I didn't know what love was and was quite lonely. I was really alone. I didn't have family members till my current ones now. They loved me and I thank them in gratitude for raising me. It took ten times before I met people that would truly treat me like a family member. I had no friends before. Rather those that I saw were my friends tend to distant me. Isolation was really my friend. However, it's different now. I have Shanda. She is my family, friend and someone I trust and love to be around. Now whenever I see her, I always smile and encourage her to do the same. She's my motivator;always by my side.

Zane decided to run ahead up a hill. " Meet you up there Shanda. See if you can catch me."

"Zane.... You know I am slow at running. Wait!"

Zane ran ahead. Within minutes, Zane was out of sight. Shanda shook her head. "Man, this boy."

When Zane got to the top of the cliff, things got dark all around him. The sky darkened. Lightning flashed.

"Geez....The Weather forecast didn't say anything about today being cloudy and dark. Ummm... I recall people say the park is dangerous when it's dark. Yet, it is just still is a park. Nothing dangerous about it. The scenery is great. 

Suddenly, the lightning flashed and hit the ground that was right in front of Zane. The flash was too bright, Zane had to look away. When Zane looked at back, guy dressed in a ragged red color leather jacket with ripped off leather pants and wearing pointy shoes appeared in front of Zane.

"Look it here, a troubled child. Do you know who I am? "(Zane looked confused-Who is this guy?) "Seriously, your parents never really told you?"

" What? Told me that a werido like you need a new look? I think I can figure that out on my own. Man, those pants and shirts; totally not the modern day type of clothing."

"Ughh...You're one of us; .....a Vampeneeze."

Zane scoffed

"What?? There are no such things as Vampires or their cousins, Vampeneezes. This not a fairy tale land. Hello, welcome to Earth?"

"You have much to learn, but don't worry, I will teach you everything you need to know to rule this world and be King of mankind. Together we can be unstoppable." Daniel walked toward Zane

"You're out of your mind! Why would I ever want to work with a crazy person like you?

"Because you are destined to be the Vampeneeze Lord. It was written in your fate. You cannot deny your prophecy."

"Outlandish! You're Crazy! I may have been separated from my older brother when I was young, but now I make lots as a bank manager. I have a wonderful girlfriend named Shanda. We are going to get married soon. Despite my shortcomings, I worked hard to get a good life! There is no way I would listen to you, buffoon!"

"Yo calm down dude. Reserve that anger for later, especially when you have a talk with your love one. Zane turned around and looked at Daniel with a frown. "She has been hiding something from you.

"You're insane."

"HAHA! Whatever. We will meet again!"

Daniel threw a smoke bomb on the floor and left the scene

"What? Wait?"