Vol.1 The Astral Plane: The Beginning

Ch.1 Reincarnation

My name is Satoshi Tora, and right now I'm standing in front of a massive gate. The gate is bigger than anything I've ever seen. If I had to compare it with anything it would be to hight of the sky. Even Mt. Fuji can't compare to the scale of this gate. Moving on their are tons of people just in line I'm in. Multiple people as far as I can see.

In this place it's impossible to tell when a new  day starts and ends. There's light here constantly. I've also notice that in the sky their are a few human like weird looking beast that look like purple frogs but with wings. I've also notice that if you try to get out of line your in, you will be attack by one of those beast till the point were you're on the floor beat to the point of dead, but in this strange place no matter how badly you get beaten you will constantly get your body restored. Even, I myself though I could rush out of this place and failed to do so. Even with my trusted blade Mamoru didn't stand a chance.
Since the point I was brought here the only progress I've made is making it to the front of the line I am in. Today finally became the day I could leave this line only to find out that inside of the gate their was and even bigger building than that gate itself. As soon as I got inside the gate I was told follow one of the frog beast. I followed it till it brought me to a room where I was to told to go inside of.
Moments later a man showed up inside the room. This man was a tall man with white hair and beard. He was wearing very strange clothing and held a book with my name on it. The man looks at me and then started talking. 

Old Men - "Hello boy welcome to the plane of rebirth. I am what you would call king Yama, but I prefer to be called a planer. If you don't know what I do well I'll tell you. It's a person that looks at your history and decided on what plane you should be reincarnated into. Now give me a minute to look at your history and I'll answer some of your questions before I send you off............Okay done so base on your past. I have decide that one of the lower higher level martial planes would be best for you."

Satoshi Tora - at that time I didn't understand anything, so I asked "What's a martial plane? And what do you mean by levels?"
The planer then started to explain that depending on the choices you made in life will depends on what plane you go to. For example, if you were a man that was a martial artist that live your life by the way of the sword a samurai. Then you would be reincarnated into that type of plane. And depending on the success you had in your plane will depends if you move up to higher plane or stay in the same plane. This is all based on how many great martial artist you defeated, killed, or your success. Now if you were a mass murder that kill for fun you would be in sent to mass murdering plane. As for levels they go like this low-low, low-mid, low-high and it goes all the way up to high repeating this concept. By the way my old world earth is a small planet which is a very tiny minuscule part of my plane which consist of millions of stars, and planets was something I also learned from and he also told me "You would normally expect a plane of that size to have a least a few great organism to be born but nope all you have are at most average organisms hardly doing anything impressive." 
Old Man(Planar) - Oh look at the time it's just about time for you to reincarnated so I have to tell you some quick stuff first right before you leave the door you came in from, you have to drink this tea. It will help you lose your memories because its against the law to be reincarnated with your old memories. Unless of special circumstances. The last thing you should know is that when you die in your old plane and you are reincarnated into higher plane than your own plane you will gain and inborn ability. Inborn ability are very rare in the lower planes like the one your going to. Inborn ability are stuff like levitation or fire breathing it's pretty much abilities that you normally couldn't have even if you trained you whole life. Off course not everything is impossible if you ever make it into the higher planes. Reality only exist for the weak. While the truly strong ones have not limits. Now walk through the door and you will be reborn.
Satoshi Tora - After I exit the door, I saw blood and a new world.
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