The Fault In Our STORIES

Story Review Request-My Other Half by Emzaa

I've read this story about a dozen times, it just is very enjoyable to read! As much as I like it, I feel as if Marco and Mason, being twin siblings, could have more disagreements. My favorite part has to be the part where Mason sticks up for Marco, grabbing Kate's hand before she slapped Marco.

There's not much else to say about this story...it's very original and a good read, not bad, unless you count minor mistakes most other unedited stories have.

And...here's a bit to get you interested.

Mason and Morgan, the twins of South Shields, boy and girl. They had it pretty good; steady house, parents who loved their "double-trouble" babies and everyone around them adored them. It changed at the mother's promotion...

"V-Vancouver!?" The father shouted. The mother winced. "Y-yeah..." She barely whispered. He couldn't believe it, she wanted to move all the way to Canada, just for a stupid promotion in her journalism. He yelled all the reasons they shouldn't go at her. At this time, Morgan and Mason were only babies...

Okay, I'm not spoiling everything.

On the Bitzy scale, I give it a full 10/10!