Rewrite For My Bullies

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Authors Note:  

Hey guys I decided to rewrite the first chapter please tell me which one is better that would really help me out and sorry if theirs any mistakes it's my auto correct ill try and fix it

 

And there kinda the same in some parts but there also different so please read 

Oh and a big shout out to LoveStory20 for making this chapter happen she inspired me and with her comment she made my night thanks now onto the chapter

" Hey f@g " a boy with black raven hair said to me.

" Whatcha doing loaner " the boy next to him said wearing red toms.

I know who they are I just I don't want to turn around to see their faces.

" Hey he said something to you " curly turned me around with anger in his eyes.

I couldn't speak or say anything and when I tried and opened my mouth nothing came out I was probably too weak to say or do anything.

You think that ill be used to it by now with all the name calling, beatings, and constant bulling but no I don't know I just feel helpless, weak, I'm a loaner.

" They were talking to you " the boy next to curly said while he slammed me against the lockers that were in the hallways a shock came up my spine and I winced in pain.

The boy that slammed me up the lockers was I think lam or something like that I don't know I can't think straight right now with the pain I have right now in my back oh yea I think someone said that his name was Liam.... Liam Payne.

So let me tell you a little about my life I get bullied everyday for being 'ugly' 'a f@g' ' fat' 'eating too much' 'being a loaner' and that's just the beginning theirs so much more they judge me for everything I do I don't know why thou I never did anything to anyone before. Why haven't I told anyone before you ask? Well because theirs no one to tell to I used to have friends but they just left me. Where are my parents? Why haven't I told them? Well I would like to know that too. where are they? I can't tell them because I don't know where they are either. They just one day left me all alone and I haven't heard of them since they were probably ashamed of me too but my parents and my friends are two other stories that I can't tell you right now.

So now let me tell you about my bullies but these are just some of my bullies.  

the raven hair boy is Zayn Malik the schools jock.  

The tom boy is Louis Tomlinson and let me tell you he has some sass on him and an ass.  

Then theirs curly his name is Harry Styles.  

And I already told you about Liam Payne he has a low quiff not as high as the other but if he didn't hang out with that 'posy' he would resemble a puppy.

So these are some of my bullies that I have to live with but sometimes I wonder is it worth living in this hell worth all of the constant bulling being fun of and being physically and mentally abused?

I ask myself that everyday and I think maybe the world would be a better place if I just die

I was knocked out of my thoughts when I felt someone's knee collide with my stomach it was Zayns knee apparently I was zoning off and just staring at him.

" What are you staring at " Zayn says with anger in his eyes.

" This b!tch was looking at you " Liam says with an attitude.

" Wow he really is a f@g " Harry the says with a smirk on his face.

" Harry don't say that we don't know what he is " Louis says acting all sassy but mean at the same time.

And with that I waited for the bulling which I wasn't waiting for long because after Louis said that his fist collided with my jaw and I just fell to the ground.

" Aww Louis now look what you've done now we can't hurt him that much " the boys wine.

" you can still hurt him see " Louis says while kicking me not even waiting for me to have a chance to recover from the fall.

And as Louis hit me the all five boys came closer to me punching and kicking me and when they finished they just left me their all alone again to maybe even rot.

" guys lets just leave this 'thing' here " Harry says with a pleasant look on his face like he was pleased of what all of them did to me.

" Yea ok will finish him later" Liam says with a disgusted look on his face.  

" let go lads " Zayn finally said and with that they all left.

I was now just laying on the cold hard floor and I was about to pass out when I felt warm hands around my waist grabbing me and carrying me but before I could see who it was I fainted and with that I was being carried by someone but who?

Authors note:  

Well I hope you guys liked my rewrite please tell me which one you liked better and please excuse me for my first chapter for some reason it turned out weird but I hope you liked my rewrite and please read it please comment if you like it and 10 reads for next chapter and I promise ill make them more interesting and longer

and please read my prologue for my other chapter its called 'my bad boy'.  

if I get enough reads ill start that one too thank you love you guys :)❤

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