Hey guys...
this is the first chapter so...
Enyoi!Dash pov*
Today is the worst day in my life, yersteday was hearts and hooves day,
Maybe you guys don't understand what i'm talkin about... let me explain.
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NarratorRainbow Dash was talkin' with rarity about how she could ask out applejack in hearts and hooves day...
Rainbow Dash like Applejack since he was the race leaves... And since then he has not had the courage to tell her
Rarity : come on darling, you need to tell her soon.... you don't want another pony come and stay with her rigth?
Rainbow dash : I know, but what if she tell me she dosen't feel the same way about me? ¿what if she want us just to be friend and nothin' more?
Rrity: oh phleas...that is not gonna happend, I know for sure... all you need no do is ask
Rainbow: alright i'll do it
Rarity: oh wonderfull! You need to tell me what she tell you okay?
Rainbow: jaja okay rarity i will *she said a little sad*
Rarity: come on darlin' i know everything' is gonna be alright
Rainbow: If you say so...
___________________Hey guys!!
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let me know what ya think