The demon war. Age of heroes book 1

Angels

I was running again. Different then last time. With Judgment in my hand I moved quickly and caused more fatal blows. I saw my target, a class three demon. It was a large red lizard with sharp teeth and glowing red eyes. I ran forward and struck quickly, my sword cutting straight through its scales. It turned Toward me in surprise but it was two late, my sword had cut deep in its flesh and it will be sent back were it came from. It screamed in pain as a blueish greenish fire enveloped its body and then it burst into flames. I smiled to myself. "You're getting better at this." I herd someone say from behind. I turned around, already knowing who it is, and saw the familiar face of Mortus. "What can i say? I'm a natural." I put my sword in its scabbard and started heading home we me I noticed something out of the corner of my eye. Something running.
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I'm back. I'm sorry for being gone for awhile
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I saw him. A fallen angel! Black wings and everything! I have to warn the others. I ran toward the camp as I thought this. He was fighting a demon, a class three! And he was with him. I was still running when a shadow passed overhead. I looked up and saw the Angel, his black wings glistening in the light and his dark brown eyes shining like a beacon. He started a dive and I realized I couldn't make it in time. The angel landed in front of me as I stopped and looked at him. His brown hair was messy and his wings were beautiful. It was intimidating to be near such a creature, but what was most intimidating was the way he looked at me, his bright, warm eyes turned dark and cold. I knew who was in charge and immediately dropped and kneeled down before the superior creature. He looked down at me, a disapproving look on his face.
"You may rise." He said to me, his voice was sharp as a dagger, yet soft and comforting. I rose before the Angel, head still locked on the ground. Why was I doing this? I should be running!
"What is your name?" He asked me with is soft dagger voice. "D-David." I was scared, I herd about fallen angels and what they can do.bi had every resin to be. "What brings you here David?"
He continued looking at me with his clod eyes. I felt like I was frozen in place, unable to move a muscle. Somehow I was able to answer. "I heard something and came to check It out." I lied. He looked at my face and I found my head slowly rising. I looked into his eyes. It hurt, like a thousand icy needles slowly penetrating my flesh. I quickly moved away from the Angels gaze and to the Forrest floor. "David, I will let you go with a warning. But do not return." I looked up in surprise. He's letting me go?! Before he could change his mind I was running. Boy did I have some news for the commander.
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I think that is the longest chapter I have ever done. Well as usual pleas tell me what you think and remember to not correct my spelling rudely *cough*emodash20 *cough*
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