Chapter to the rose of a Heroin
ok jazzie-kun pleas dont get mad at me cause your not in it yet. You'l apear soon dont worry.
StarKit wock up and sunlit was in the branches. She closed her eyes againstill tired. Butter mom wouldn't let her sleep not today. (Today I wock up)
"Sweety its time to get up" said Dawnsparkle; her eys shinning. "Today is important today."
"What is it Mom" said StarKit awake right away. Then the she cat rememembered what today was.
"Ohmigosh its my serimony today!' she squelled excercisedly. Today was the day she was an apprentice! (Omigosh the spelling mistakes)
She flicked outside not even waiting for her Mom. But her Mom cot up to her quick. (Cot up)
"Sweety you know the clans don't except cat slike use sometimes." She said. (Accept the fact that you spelled that wrong)
StarKit glared. She didn't lake beig told that. Just because her Mom was a usedto be Shadowclan cat and her dad was jayFeather the medicine Cat didn"t mean she ws different!
(Um...)
"StarPaw come here." Said FireStar from the leg. He jumped down. (So where's his other three legs)
"StarKit it s tome for you to become an apentice: he said. "Your a strong brave cat and because of that I will mentor with you." (Mary freaking sue)
Ever body gasped. StarKit did too. Se herd hear mother say "Wow!".
Firehert liked her shoulder. He whispered in her ear "youll be the best their ever was StarPaw I know ti." (Who's the new leader?)
Surpised she walked away when they were done howling for her./(woof woof) Then she went ofer (I don't understand) to JayFeathern and DawnSparkle who were very prod.
(Prod... Same)
"Daughetr where very happy but he have to say something said Jayfeather his chest puffed ouit. "You see there is this prophcy Starcaln gave me it said that out of the darkness, stars will come and get rid of the evil tiger and holly." (Seriously, this is torture to read)
StarPaw gasped. What does it mean?
lol I update fast dont i. REVEIW or ill hit over the head with a frying pan! XDD jk (umm hit yourself? (Please)jk)
