Ok, so let me break it down. This is the "unintentional underage".
This story plot is pretty basic. Just love. But, the problem is
1. The girl character is older than the guy,
I don't know if this is you or if your okay with this, but personally I'm not.
I'd see and interesting story, about, let's say Nash.
So, the problem is the main characters or lovers would be
Nash and Kate Upton.
What!?!?!
She's like 23or 25, doesn't matter she's wayyy too old, like, this falls under the appearance categoryAppearance
Kate Upton = Good enough
Gigi Hadid = Good enoughBecky G = Not so good
Melanie Martinez = Ehh---
All of them are extremely beautiful, everyone is, but do really need for her to be drop dead gorgeous? Does she just have to be your main character because she's perfect and flawless and this and that and the other, you can describe how beautiful she is until you get to west bubble fück for all I care,But, just because Melanie has a tooth gap does not mean she isn't pretty enough to be in the story, or Becky isn't.....skinny enough, no.
But really, you have to go to such high levels of beauty that the main character has to be watered down with makeup and in real life she's like 575 years old and he's like 4.
You know what the real fucked up part about the story is?
....In the story, she's the nerd.
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dumb fanfic moments
RandomOk, so I'm just ranting about things that I think are dumb about fanfics, mine are dumb too but these are careless mistakes. I'm only trying to make ppl laugh, don't take it serious lmao