Murdered

Chapter 2

{Emma}     

*Laney sat over me, trying to lug my..me away. She dragged me to her house. She put us down in her cellar, in a secret hidden room only she knew about. She then came back up and got Ashley. By now, my mom was frantic, looking for me and Ashley. I longed to hug her, make her see who did this, make Laney pay for what she did to us.
My sister stood me nearby, testing her new ghostly abilities.
"Aren't you the least bit concerned about all this?" I ask my sister who's busy floating around.
"Weee!" She calls out from above me.
"I'll take that as a no." I sighed.
Actually, testing out my new abilities would be kinda cool. And maybe I can use my powers to kill Laney.
"How do you do that?" I asked Ashley.
"Oh, it's easy." She said. "Just think about it." and with that she started flying around our house.
I though about it. And I started to float.
"Woah.." I said to myself as I started floating up. This is actually kinda cool.
And then suddenly, I'm falling.
I scream as I hit the ground, and realize that no one can hear me besides Ashley. And also, there was no pain.
Oh, right. I'm dead. I can't feel pain.
I sighed and tried more of my ghostly abilities.

So I know this isn't the best, but I'm working on it and I'm trying to make my story better. Comment and let me know what you think of the chapter, thanks!
~Landry