IN THE END (a divergent fanfiction)

Deathly Denial

(A/N THIS IS A REWRITTEN VERSION OF HER DEATH BY ME, AS TO NOT PLAGIARIZE THE WORKS OF THE AUTHOR )
    TRIS PoV
    Ive been in this state before ... I think as my vision begins to go black. I feel a sharp pain go through my body. I feels like a battering ram has hit me. I see the blood splatter as I suddenly remember why I've been here. David's shot rings through my ears. Before I slip away for good I lock eyes with Tobias as his hulking body comes running toward me with teary eyes. Oh tobias sweet Tobias... I really do love him I think in my delirious state as I fall. I The last thing I feel is the cold surface reaching me beneath my back.
    TOBIAS PoV
    It's been a split second. Her almost lifeless body flies to the ground beneath her as a bullet rips through her soft pale flesh causing a splatter of blood to free itself from her body. Her face looks unimpressed as I run to her, my eyes flooding with tears as though a dam was broken. Her thin body's sprawled out, her starry eyes closed. She looks so young in this sleep like state. I bend to check her pulse as the blood keeps flowing from her flesh. I can't help but notice a small bulge in her stomach as I stare at the blood.
    I turn and David begins to flee the room. Panic is obviously flooding his face as he turns from me. One step. My hand is at my side grabbing my gun. Two steps. I lock and load my gun as I stare at his now glistening head of sweat. Three steps. I take aim through the small homemade cylinder scope atop my gun. Four steps. My finger pulls down on the trigger. As if in slow motion it reaches his head and makes contact with his skull. My ears ring out but I'm not bothered. A loud crack follows the still ringing sound of my fire. His skull splits open to reveal plentiful pale pink brain matter. Blood sprits from the crack and covers his hair.
    As his head connects with the ground another explosion of brain matter is sent into the air from the jolt. I turn from the massacred corpse and focus on Tris once again. My pupils widen as I see her eyes wide open. I yell at the others in the room to leave. She sits up. Her hands travel to her wound as she tears the already ripped cloth to reveal a bulletbroof vest and an empty red stained packet under her stained shirt. I suddenly realize the red packet was fake blood. She must have faked her death. But why?
    I dismiss the thought after I feel the tugging of a weak hand on my shirt and I clash my lips into Tris's. We move in unison as i pick her up but then I fall.

    TRIS PoV
    Suddenly everything around me falls. Tobias still has his strong tanned arms wrapped around me as he lays on the floor. His gorgeous eyes stay open though everything's frozen. I take his arms off waist and stand up. Nothing is moving but me. I furrow my brow in confusion. I want Tobias to be awake so I can explain everything. But as I grab his face my hands slip through his skin as though he's just a ghost. A thought runs through my head as I look down. But instead of the dark floor theirs just white. I look back up.
    I'm suddenly in a pure white bed and a matching room. Tori stands in front of me. I smile and almost cry from the joy of seeing her again. Her pupils widen. She opens her mouth in awe. I'm left once again flabbergasted. She walks across the pure white room to a single blue button. Her finger weighs down on it. An almost silent buzzer goes off.
    I want to get up from where I lay but I realize my hands, feet and waist are fastened to the cot.
I must look so flustered.
I whisper under my breath, "th-th-this can't be real.."
Suddenly I'm screaming. My blonde hair crashing against the back wall of the bed. I'm screaming for nothing and yet for everything. I scream for Tobias, my mother, my father, Caleb, Christina. I scream for anyone and everyone. Yet I'm not screaming at all. My vocal cords no longer vibrate and I see a hidden white door open and a group of tall people dressed in a soothing baby blue come crashing through. Their jumpsuits contrast so deeply with the room and their faces covered in an appealing orange mask contrast even more. I quiet down for a moment before they tackle me and fill my veins with a clear substance from a syringe. I scream once more an then I'm completely sedated as I return to the endless sleep. My arms are limp just as my legs an then the view of Tobias returns.