To Kill or Love

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                                                           TO KILL OR LOVE.

-          Odessa.

   It was my wedding day and I was the perfect, blushing bride. Or so everyone thought.

   I know I’m supposed to be happy and nervous and all. But how would you feel if you were arranged to be married to someone that you don’t know? And it was all arranged by your only living relative? And you were to be wed to the one person (or thing in this case) who had killed all your family members and friends? You’d be pretty much pissed right now wouldn’t you? Well, now you know how I’m feeling on my own wedding day.

   My Uncle arranged for me to marry the ‘ever so powerful’ Vampire Lord Clouse…for a price, I might add. Yes, that’s right. I was being sold as a bride because my only living relative is a selfish, greedy, money hungry, asshole.

   The only thing that made this bearable enough to go through with was my ultimate plan. If all went well I would be free forever and I would have my bittersweet revenge.

I was going to kill my new husband.

Nobody at the wedding knew that I was a vampire hunter, and that I had been training for years for this day to come.

   When I was a young girl there was a war between the vampires and humans of my town. The vampires wanted to rule over our land and keep the surviving humans as food or pets. Clouse himself had attacked my home in the middle of the night, I’ll never forget that face. My mother hid me in a trap door in the floor of my room and told me not to come out until it was safe. She was too late however in trying to save herself as my brother and father battled with Clouse’s guards. Before she had a chance to leave the room Clouse captured and fed from her. I watched hopelessly as he drained my mother and dropped her to the floor as if she were a mere chicken bone. I was terrified that he would find me when there was a loud noise from outside. I heard him curse and leave to battle with the human soldiers that were trying desperately to save our village and rid us of this evil. I cried and stayed in my hiding place until morning, waiting for the sounds of battle to fade away.

   I heard footsteps and looked out to see my brother’s friend Josh searching my home. I wanted to move but my limbs wouldn’t let me. I wanted to make a sound but when I opened my mouth no words would escape. I watched as Josh turned to leave but stopped. Slowly he came closer to the opening of the trap door and lifted it up to find me lying there, tears streaming down my face. Gently he picked me up, cradling me in his arms and holding me close as he carried me to safety.

   There was a whole group of us that had survived the attack and were able to escape. We lived in secret deep in the forest that surrounded our village. When I was old enough to understand Josh told me what had happened and explained that Clouse was the one who had killed both our families. Josh’s younger sister, also my best friend, were also a victim to the Vampire Lord’s scheme. From that day I vowed that I would do whatever it takes to kill the Vampire Lord. I trained for many years in combat becoming an expert.

   I knew that my uncle was still alive and he had become a pet for Clouse. I pleaded that he let me live with him and have me serve alongside him so that I could gain Clouse’s trust. Instead my uncle sold me to Clouse for enough money to set him up for the rest of his life and ultimately gain his freedom.